Wonderful that's what this is. I like seeing Faye's past, how she became what she is now, and I just wish that this was longer...

mello yello doesn't taste that great. its okay, though, just not great.

your writing is very good-- clear and well-paced, consistent. your characterization is spot on, which isn't really easy when dealing with Faye-situations before the series. her evolution as you describe it is logical and very, you know, Faye.