Hello!
You're a great author! I really like you're storys.

Sorry, my English isn't very good.

Okay. This is like good. Were you like watching "Undercover" as you were writing this. Hehe. I love it. I totally wished that Casey was actually in that eppy. Cause I wonder what she would have said about all that. Gives me something to think about. But I like yours. Sorrie for rambling.

That was great! I don't want it to be finished. I guess I'll have to go read your other stories now!

even if I didn't see that episode I loved the fic also because you did explain what happens in details
it was pretty good
thx

I liked it

this was a pretty good story, i really liked that Fin and Olivia got to talk after the whole thing. good job.

Excellent! You capture Olivia's emotions well with her response to the reporter's question, her explanation to Elliot, and finally her interaction with Fin, which is appropriate because he is the only person who witnessed what Harris was about to do. And apparently, until the show's last scene, he was the only person on the squad who knew because the guard was not charged with attempted rape, just physical assault of an officer.

Also, you reveal Fin's regrets about striking Olivia while undercover. A realistic touch.

Keep up the good work.

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This was one of the most well writen stories I've read so far.:) Only problem is that it was too short. :) Do you think you would be able to write additional chapters? I also like how you wrote that Elliot didn't let his true feelings show in front of the other guys. That seemed typical.Good job.

Nice really nice.

Aw. That was sweet. I really enjoyed that episode, and I liked this that you wrote about it. It was very well written. Good job. :)

Good very good!

Hi,

I'd like to put a link to your fanfic on my blog. May I do it? Please let me know.