Reviews for All That Remains

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Kathryn Mason-Sykes 2008-09-17 ch 10,	abuseAww, why does Jack have to try to get in the way of a good thing? I realized my last review came out sounding bad when I intended to praise. I think you're doing a great job with this story and keeping things tasteful and well-written. Kudos. Next chapter, please! :)
cymbalism 2008-09-07 ch 9,	abuseOranges will never be the same again. Race licking Spot's fingers f the juice? YES PLEASE. You made it worth the wait, chica. Thanks :)
Kathryn Mason-Sykes 2008-08-30 ch 9,	abuseAwesome chapter! I've been waiting for them to do something like this for a few chapters now. There are so many ways you could have messed this chapter up, but it came out perfectly. Well done!
SPRACE's Illegitimate Child 2008-08-29 ch 9,	abuseFINALLY! FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY! I have been waiting for...four months for that to happen! And the way it was executed...precisely how I would see it happening. Except way more creative and written even more brilliantly that I could have asked for! And I just about died at the end of the chapter: "“Do you like kissing me?” Race asked, not looking at Spot. “I wouldn’t have done it if I didn’t.”" ... "“Shut up, Conlon.” “Why don’t you make me?” Spot challenged. “All right then I will,” Race said, taking another step closer and kissing the taller boy firmly on the mouth." So very perfect. There was a lot working up to this chapter, and I tell you...I've been reading this for a long time, and every chapter I have said: "Why don't they just kiss already!?" And look! You made it happen! And I was throughly impressed. Not a single line you should have done any differently.
Rustie73 2008-08-20 ch 8,	abuseGreat switch in mood from the last chapter. Once Race and Spot have buried the hatched, there is a subtle yet noticeable difference in their interaction. Their exchanges seem more open and natural. Can’t wait to see where this is all going.
Rustie73 2008-08-20 ch 7,	abuseSurprisingly dark turn of events. It’s amazing that Spot lived through this portion of his life.
Rustie73 2008-08-19 ch 6,	abuseThe fight scene was wonderfully written and choreographed. Their differing views on defending the honor of their people brought a wonderful twist to the chapter.
Rustie73 2008-08-19 ch 5,	abuseThis is a really fine chapter. I loved the boys background stories and the look at their early lives. These two lines are perfect Race and had me laughing out loud: “No, your dead granny’s favorite stuffed dodo,” Race said, rolling his eyes. “I’m short, not blind,” Race said dryly . . .
Rustie73 2008-08-19 ch 4,	abuseI really liked the shirt idea. Race’s frustration and Spot’s incessant teasing was so much fun. Your last paragraph gave this chapter the perfect ending.
Kathryn Mason-Sykes 2008-08-18 ch 8,	abuseNice chapter! I think one of my favorite parts is when Race gets uncomfortable watching Spot eat...letting me, the reader, know that Spot's feelings are probably not one-sided. As always, my favorite part of your writing is the banter between the boys. I also like the fact that Spot doesn't want "Jacky-boy" getting too close with Race. Nice touch. :)
MasacreInTheLivingRoom 2008-08-16 ch 8,	abuseThey're just so cute! >.< GAH! Alright I'm ok now. I must say that I am in love with this fic. I can't really find anything to criticize about this chapter besides the fact that it was a little short. It was a good follow up to the previous chapter though ^.^ I really like your writing style. I hope you post again soon : p
spot'scrazygirl 2008-08-13 ch 7, anon.	abusei loved it when is the next chapter? update soon
Kathryn Mason-Sykes 2008-07-28 ch 7,	abuseboys boys boys. why do they aim to hurt one another? Spot seems to be the one slinging the most gunpowder, but Race certainly holds his own. It seems like Spot's the one who's got deeper feelings too...any chance Race has a deeper appreciation for his friendship, or is Spot still the nuisance he's always trying to be? Gah, sometimes boy fights make my head hurt. But you do a great job of writing them! I totally mean that as a compliment. Anywho, next chapter please! :)
DD 2008-07-20 ch 6, anon.	abuseGreat story! I'm very excited to see how everything pans out. You've got a great touch for dialogue and imagery. Thanks for writing and posting!
MasacreInTheLivingRoom 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseSo...when's the next update? That last chapter was pretty amusing really. You've really improved since you first started posting. Hope you post again soon : p

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