Have you ever written for "Speed Racer: the Next Generation"? Have ever considered it?

Please continue. I would really like to know what happened.

Hi Roadrunner,

Its looking good and reading better, Please keep it up.

I like this story and hope you continue with it.

well this is certainly an interesting chapter but well things are not what they seem sorry it's been a while i never put the story on alert well can't wait for more

This is wonderful writing. You write "real" family scenes and place emphasis on how real people would act and behave. It's very human.

hey i know it's been a while but i haven't had a computer can't wait for more

can't wait for more

Short, but great. Well written, Plausible and makes you want to know more. Please continue soon.

Oh my goodness, you are doing a great job on this story. I love it. I can't wait util the next chapter.

roadrunner74,

You are the master at writing emotions. It's a great talent and one that not many people have. I nearly cried at your description of Spritle and his thoughts.

I agree with your take on those three completely! This was a well-done chapter, in my book. Keep it going!

Very pretty, the history between Tara and Rex is wonderful.

Watch your tenses, present makes it seem a little cheesy, but it's really fantastic!

I'm liking this story a lot! Interesting background you gave Rex and Tara-great job!

Well done. I appreciate the background with Rex and Tara.