awesome posom!! i knew there had to be a way for jake to win!!

So awesome. No clue why you didn't get more reviews that this...?

I was literally on the edge of my seat, reading this. Some stories, you can just TELL they're going to have a happy ending. Others, you know for sure that the ending will be tragic. But not so with this story. It was so suspenseful... I honestly didn't know how things were going to work out until the very end.

This is going in my favorites.

Wow, great story. Loved the ending. Thanks.

Awesome. Beyond. Belief.

This was a gorgeous one-shot. I can't say much else other than thank you for the wonderful read.

Holy jeez.

That was really good, I thought there were going to be more chapters so I freaked out when it came to the end.

:)

I don't know why you don't have more reviews for this one, cause it's really well done. I loved everything about it, the angst, the urge, Bella's doubts... everything. And the end as well. I don't think it's a cliffhanger, I think you explained it all perfectly. Loved how you used Rosalie to help Jacob, makes a lot of sense.

so does bella stay with bella and they get married or what i dont like cliff hangers but are you going to continue. wow i like how you put suspense in this story and how it all turns around so does that mean that edward leaves and bella stay together?

Loved it!! Absolutely loved it!! I got a little scared when Bella was about to die, but overall a great story!

That would actually make a lot of sense if she was allergic to the venom or something.

Then she'd magically get to end up with Jacob and all would be wonderful :D

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Great story once again! :D

- Heather.

This DEFINITELY made my day! Amazingly written, in fact, I wouldn't be surprised if this plotline ends up in the actual Breaking Dawn. Jacob deserves this ending, and I also liked how to put Rosalie into this. It was very clever. :)

I would've liked it to be longer though, but I loved it nonetheless. Keep writing!

- Unspoken

Oh my Lord...beautiful. Simply lovely. Needs more reviews, this does. I can tell you poured your heart and soul into this--the emotions feel so tangible, so real. I especially love how you wove in Rosalie's role in the beginning; that was clever. All in all, amazing, and I hope to see more J/B as well-written as this. ^^

beautiful.

really pin-point characteristics.
i love jacob's passion here...

That was deeply depressing, yet strangely fulfilling. Amazingly fantastic.

Fantastic story.
Beautifully written.

I wish it didn't end so suddenly though.

huh? why is she allergic to the venom? I don't get it. But I did love the story nonetheless. It was very well done.