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| Kat 2008-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseHoly jeez. That was really good, I thought there were going to be more chapters so I freaked out when it came to the end. :) |
| H. James 2008-08-01 ch 1,  | abuseI don't know why you don't have more reviews for this one, cause it's really well done. I loved everything about it, the angst, the urge, Bella's doubts... everything. And the end as well. I don't think it's a cliffhanger, I think you explained it all perfectly. Loved how you used Rosalie to help Jacob, makes a lot of sense. |
| pitcaptain 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseso does bella stay with bella and they get married or what i dont like cliff hangers but are you going to continue. wow i like how you put suspense in this story and how it all turns around so does that mean that edward leaves and bella stay together? |
| Angelfly06 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseLoved it!! Absolutely loved it!! I got a little scared when Bella was about to die, but overall a great story! |
| MagicalHeather 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThat would actually make a lot of sense if she was allergic to the venom or something. Then she'd magically get to end up with Jacob and all would be wonderful :D If you still favor Jacob over Edward you'd probably like my fanfiction, check it out and tell me what you think :) /s/4311454/1/My_Virtue Great story once again! :D - Heather. |
| TheUnspokenArtist 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThis DEFINITELY made my day! Amazingly written, in fact, I wouldn't be surprised if this plotline ends up in the actual Breaking Dawn. Jacob deserves this ending, and I also liked how to put Rosalie into this. It was very clever. :) I would've liked it to be longer though, but I loved it nonetheless. Keep writing! - Unspoken |
| The Scarlet Sky 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseOh my Lord...beautiful. Simply lovely. Needs more reviews, this does. I can tell you poured your heart and soul into this--the emotions feel so tangible, so real. I especially love how you wove in Rosalie's role in the beginning; that was clever. All in all, amazing, and I hope to see more J/B as well-written as this. ^^ |
| hannahannah 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. really pin-point characteristics. i love jacob's passion here... |
| Description 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was deeply depressing, yet strangely fulfilling. Amazingly fantastic. |
| Sarahh Jane 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseFantastic story. Beautifully written. I wish it didn't end so suddenly though. |
| TwilightG 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusehuh? why is she allergic to the venom? I don't get it. But I did love the story nonetheless. It was very well done. |