More, please! Excellent story.

I've been hoping you would update soon. Can't wait to see where you're taking us.

I really like your story. Thank you for updating.

col

uh oh! cant wait to read more!!

gosh, I wonder who the father is... yikes:) no wonder she's so tempered ;)
I'm looking forward to when Julie comes :) it's gonna be real fun!

And as an reply on Clover5's comment about not listening to me: I was just trying to help! I didn't mean to put you down or anything... I know it might seem like I only see faults, but it wasn't like that, I just wanted to help, that's all...
And your writing's really good!
And about my mistakes: "Really good written, this can become a great story!:)" I can see just one mistake? well instead of good... is there more?

I hope I don't put you off writing, because I really want to know where you take this story:D
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Tessie

I'm impressed Morelli would agree to let Julie stay at his place ... this could be very interesting...

Alf

OMFG
I know why Steph is 'sick' now! LOL
you write nice making out sessions. XD mine's not as great
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I just finished a steph plum novel, and it's actually pretty good. hm. but I have to agree with someone's review earlier (forgot who soz) that you should turn Steph's bitchyness down. She isn't half as angry in the books.

-Lena Pena-

I hope this is a Cupcake story, but why is she sleeping in a different room? Are you being mean? I love Joe and Stephanie together.

COOL chappie.

Despite the descriptor, this is not a cupcake fic.

Would suggest turning down Steph's bitchiness a notch so that she comes across more likeable. It will be fun to see how all three deal with having a kid around. good luck with the rest of your story.

Hope you're not paying much attention to tereseh. Let's just count the mistakes in this one sentence of hers ... Really good written, this can become a great story!:)

Yea! I love Steph's humor/mental talking:) Julie staying with STeph and Morelli uh oh

Oh it is really going to be a Cupcake ! Thank you, thank you, Susie

Kay, this chapter was better now that I've read it:)
One thing though...
(I'm gonna hang my correction-muse, she's sitting here with a red marker pen pinpointing out every misplaced dot)

"M, chocolate, I thought to myself."
Usually when I think, I think it to myself, so far I have never thunk anything to anybody else, at least not what I'm aware of.
(my muse is poking me, but I'm ignoring her...)
Therefore "I thought to myself" could be reduced to "I thought" and maybe add an adverb or something. E.g. "I thought happily"
(Poking my muse back. Stop Pokin!)
I mean, I would probably also write "I thought to myself" or "I thought happily to myself"
(To my muse:Okay, now I'll rip the damn marker out of your hands if you don't shut it!)
You do a good job, just ignore my correcrion-muse... *whispers* I think it's that time of the month, you know...;)

Don't let the red marker stop the words from coming! Yay!^.^
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Tessie