um... im a bit confused... but it was good for what i understood

What a slice of life.

My teenaged kids ask the same question Bella asked all the time.

Wow, an amazing story, and I really don't read harry potter fics.

Pro: Very well written and funny story
Con: Too short.

10 out of 10

Haha, this was funny ^^ It seriously was :D Though I noticed at least two spelling mistakes,

1)the open curtains and was relplaced by.
-It should be replaced.

2)and Walburga just looked displeased to be interupted.
-it should be interrupted.

Hopefully none of my corrections are wrong, I only wish to help! :D
This pretty little one-shot was hilarious xD Sometimes people can be so immature xD And then a little child comes in making all sorts of random questions and correcting said grown-ups. Absolutely priceless ^^

Best Regards,
Rita

The whole scene is a bit confusing (didn't get the "hung upside down" thing) but I really like Bella's characterization, especially the last line.
- Gaby

a very interesting little story! nice job!

i think it would have been better if i got it...
still nice though.

This was funny. I was a little confussed as to why a man was hanging outside the window but after re-reading it I got it. LOL

And Bella's remark was perfect. Thats the part that made me laugh outloud. Nicely done. :)

Lovely! You captured Bella very well, although I was a little confused by the first paragraph. Very amusing though, thank-you!

Nice image! I like little Bella..

Pretended to have. lol. Good job:D:D:D

Ha! I like the concept, and the story! It be great!

Hm... the first paragraph was a bit awkwardly written, and I didn't really relate to it... I dunno why. You had quite a few typos too, you might wanna check that.

Nice job.

-Defier-

Heehee. I laugh because, I too, am immature.

Haha, very funny :P Some of the sentences were a little short and could probably have done with a little bit of extra detail, but overall it was a nice piece; I especially liked Bella's role in it. Good job.