"...that one damned kiss."

Great description. It was a sweet bitter oneshot. Loved it.

Wow. Oh my gosh, this was beautifully sad.

You have such talent, Zayz.

I love Jack's musings. I really do. How you describe Elizabeth and how he ponders over that one kiss...the one kiss that will stick with the both of them forever.

And your descriptions! What can I say, other than they just blew me away!

Breath-taking one-shot! I really hope that they would one day meet up again... (The Sparrabether in me comes out, yes) but still. The way you write Jack; casual, calm, pondering over what had happened...

You gotta write more. Please?

That was a good one. I liked the reflections of all the ways she looked at him.

i liked it. quaint and bittersweet.

Very well written!

Jeez Zay-la! A Pre-birthday present? o3o You're the best thing out there love. 3

Ah, this little one-shot is just what I needed on this Friday morning. The thoughts and descriptions, as always, were quite masterfully woven in with one another, and just completely in character. My favorite part was when Jack toasted her at the end - I just adored that. :3 This was quite lovely and I'm going to have to re-read this a bajillion times when I'm feeling lacked of Sparrabeth. ;D

Thank you so much for posting and writing this darling. :* Ily!

Lizbet the Chonkey