i like how you didn't use rhyming lines all the time. some people try and their poems are really bad because they're too busy trying to get things to rhyme.

I like it. It sounds like Remus too. Also i love Double-0-Sirius. I hope you continue it soon. Well, keep writing. (I promise to have Treasure Of Atlantis up soon.)

Peace out,
Krissi

I really liked this..you captured what i always thought remus would feel. There isn't enough good stuff written on him, so thanks!

You know, I feel this way sometimes, and I'm not even a werewolf.

I can't believe my friend D.E. reviewed this! I knew she read your stuff (she told me so herself), but I just wish she would post herself. Oh, well... I know it'll never happen, so why do I even bother?

I like this poem a lot and wish you would write more about Remus.

Ta for now!

I llllllliiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkeeeeeeeeee! I'm a big fan of werewolves(And Remus of course!) plus there's a good underlying theme!(I hope that there was ment to be an underlying theme otherwise I'm going to sound nuts!) Nice picture painting with the discrptiveness, keep it up!
A new fan,
D.E. Phoenix

This is a nice one. I am a werewolf fan ( for now, soon I will become a REAL werewolf) and I think that your poem is nice...

okay this was good too! damn I wish I could write like you.... ::runs off to cry::

It's so sad... You just can't but feel with him. The fear of being discovered and left alone, the way you describe how the werewolf feels (or rather how he does NOT feel)... I like this one.
--Altair

Very nicely done. Remus has to be one of my favourite characters (right after Severus ::grin::

*sob* That is so cute. *sob*

*sniff* Poor Remus! Very nice poem anyway! Wish I could do that!

WOW WOW WOW. That is really good... *sniff* Poor Remus!!

Poor Moony. Hes my fav (Hence the name)