ohh awesome story! update soon!

oh oh
i want reed more...
:)

This story is amazing (boys will be boys, even when they are dying underground).
...And I REALLY like your Yassen for some reason.

love it! please update soon!

Oh, i'm my be slightly biased. This was the first stroy i had ever read on fanfiction. so, i love it to death. only one owrd
UPDATE! (or else!)

like the story so far!

i'm guessing yassan and k unit have either been taken by the woman's group, 'rescued' by mi5 or some other people, or just been abandonned by the scientists for some reason. great story. please update soon. seriously, i thought rape would come into it somewhere, either from sawyer or gowe etc.

wow good chapter! update soon, i had given up on you!

No! Cliffie! What happened?? Tell me in update format, please!

rofl to your author notes


so naive aren`t they...makes ya think.


Society theese days

Still...GOGOGO!

great chapter!!
update soon please!

Put way more detail. I just read 20 chapters of one sentence, skip to the next line...like this:

Once upon a time there was a girl.

The girl's name was Anna.

The girl was



Well, you get it. Don't skip the next line as much. How about some paragraphs?

K-Unit and Yassan were taken by the "spies" and freed in some strange country where they were rescued by some spy organisation like MI6, MI5 or even the CIA. Or, they were sent off to be killed and they escaped, the SAS found them.

Don't kill any of them please! I love all your "good" characters! Have all the bad guys die and let the good guys live. Have a happy ending please!

Aww... Poor Nathan, he's in for a world of pain.

oh, oh, Yassen survives, because he's awesome. I don't know how though . . and maybe you could kill off a member of k-unit and then right at the end k-unit and alex can have a big heart to heart and alex willingly joins k-unit because they came close to all the hardships?

anyway glad your back, hope you had a nice time wherever you went ;) xx