It's a good story. If you don't mind though, I'd like to make a request if it's all right. I really like this couple. I'd like a long story that's current, acts as if it really were part of the series, a story that slows down their romantic progress so that they don't confess in the first chapter. I want things to build up. That's just a request, but I really want to read more jayxcinder fan fiction. Thanks and keep writing!

WOW, this is one of my favorite pairings. Continue please!!

aw i love cinderpaw and jaypaw together. they're so cute in eclipse. i don't get why male medicine cats can't have kits. i mean, male leaders can. why not male medicine cats? anyway, this is really cute and you should keep going with it.

Yay!

AW! So sweet! The first one's still my favorite though. I read it like EVERY day! I love it!

so sweet JAYxCINDER is one of my favorite couples

So CUTE! JayXCinder ROCKS!!

Amazingly CUTE!

I love these! You should write more of them.

Make em Longer! There so good!

Aw... That was cute. I love your Jay x Cinder stories. They're so cool!

They make a cute couple, moar plz

Aw... That was so sweet.

Know what it reminded me of? Twilight by Stepenie Meyer. Not that that's a bad thing! That's a really good book. I loved this story. Jay x Cinder... AW!

Love it! Did you get the name Jayfeather from the suspected LeafpoolXCrowfeather kits?

I love it! It's so good!