hi again! my 1st probably sounded weird. and that's because i only read the 1st chapter. now i don't like it quite as much. it's still good. But, i don't think she would realize about jake that quickly after Edward left. she would be hurt for a while. but, i guess sooner or later, jacob would become her rebound love and life.

hey again, i noticed quite a few typos in this one. it's a good story. you should definintly write a continuation! i love how you considered Edward, but i think you put to much thought into it. here's what i mean, edward wouldn't have been so jelouse sounding, nor would he have said stuff quite like that. remember, as much as you dislike him he still loves Bella, a lot. but bella is pretty much down-packed. it is an awesome story. don't take anything i say to heart. bye, fantastic aurthor.!

Hello, Katidid! This is Madame Clumsy Bella. I love your story! I especially like the part where Jake imprinted on Bella. If you want me to edit your typos, please e-mail it to me and I will gladly do so. See you at school!

Wow! That was really well written!