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| Okuyukashii 2008-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseGreat start, but since you asked, you spelled penalizing wrong. |
| The Silver Huntress 2008-05-26 ch 6, | abuse"Oh my gosh...my true love is..." "My true love is Nick Jonas?!" LOL! XD funny! keep up the good work. |
| Arieva LeFly 2008-05-26 ch 6, | abuse:lol: that was funny :lol: Gr8 story :wink: |
| Ichigo-nya 2008-05-16 ch 5, | abuseNya So cool is there going to be a nothere chapter Hope so Nya Review Review Review Review Review Review Review Review Review Review Review Review Review Review |
| Cherrie-Sakura 2008-05-16 ch 5, | abuseHello. Interesting story line and character development. I'm liking the Iriomote-Snow Leopard thing you've got going. I'm a little worried that the story's getting too simple, though. Even though you want to get out all your creative ideas, don't forget to keep adding the detail. This chapter lacked a little depth, but it was okay. It kinda reminded me a little of a timeline - one event happening after the other in chronological order. Just add detail; descriptions, thoughts and feelings of characters etc. Nice work! Update soon! Cherrie xoxo |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abuseha! ha! this is funny! poor ichigo! |
| Angel Ichigo Melody 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseImotare snow leopard. cool |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx 2008-05-08 ch 4, | abuseweird! but i like it. |
| amanda 2008-05-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseloved it! =]] make the next chapter soon! |
| nwendrot 2008-05-07 ch 4, | abuseNEXT CHAPTER PLZ! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! |
| aly 2008-05-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseloved it!! =] |
| Amanda 2008-05-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseloved it! =] make the next chapter ASAP! =] |
| Amanda 2008-05-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseloved it! =] make the next chapter ASAP! =] |
| nwendrot 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseit is really good so far, keep up the good work! |
| Cherrie-Sakura 2008-05-03 ch 3, | abuseDid you change your penname from 'Meg' to 'Ryou and Kishu lover' and then back to 'Meg' again? *narrows eyes suspiciously* Or am I just going crazy? ^^' Nice chapter! Just a few times where you left off letters; like in Lettuce - forgot the E, and 'one' - also forgot the E. But that's ok. I'm sure you know there's meant to be an E there lol. Update soon! Cherrie-Sakura xoxo |