it was very cute but sorta confusing. but still good. _

Not a bad start...but it was 'The left black pearl'.

Waaaah! I like! I like a lot. (I have a fondness for alternate world fanfics, don't ya know). Very enjoyable. Keeeeeeep writing! I wish to know what is going to happen!1

And the next chapter? When?

If you don't write more, I will personally throw you into the Grand Canyon. I SWEAR this is one of the best alternate universe fics I've experienced AND IT'S ONLY THE FRIGGIN PROLOGUE! You MUST continue, for the sake of my sanity. -Umi-chan and Da Bish-

This is interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next! Only a couple points, little things that somebody else mentioned, Sesshoumaru's name is spelled wrong and the notes in the middle kind of interrupt the flow of the story. Other than that, very cool! I love it! _

OOouuh! Love this! Even the Kikyou part!

Great writing. And for the record, I think your portrayal of Kikyou is perfectly justified. Very nice action scene. Interesting twist on the story too. Hope writer's block doesn't keep you from posting the next chapter soon!

Kikyou somewhat out of character? (Oh my! Tell me!). Anyways, THIS IS A COOL STORY! WANT TO READ THE REST! (Kikyou, boooo!)

Thats a pretty good story. i'm interested in where it will go. The only problem i ahd was how you spelled Sesshoumaru. Could you please be really nice and fix it? Its really distracting.

oh my that was good!

*Very* interesting- this looks really good. I think Kikyou is still a bit out of character (the little we do see her in normal circumstances, she seems really serious), but not much. I don't think Kagome's mom is ever given a name. Two problems- the author's notes in the middle of the story are really distracting, and you're spelling Fluffy's name wrong. It's Sesshoumaru, not Sesshimaru. ::adds to favorites::