Reviews for Hello, Goodbye

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Jean Cooper 2008-07-26 ch 6,	abuseKai wasn't shot down, he was blasted out of the sky into little pieces, those pieces were put into a box that was ran over by a truck, and then the remains of said box was blown up by an atomic bomb. LOL. I loved it, as you already knew, and I'm sorry my lazy but didn't review when you updated. I'm a bad friend v.v 1001 apologies.
Jake 2008-07-25 ch 6, anon.	abuseHello Jen. I really liked the beach setting for this chapter. I'm not completely certain that Jacks POV was essential to the story however, as it basically repeated what just happened. I'm not trying sound mean! I did like it when Jack wanted to say PWNT. ;) Did you purposely put the doctor had a soothing voice because he didn't want to scare his patience, or did you mean patients? Doing great Jen; as always I look forward to your next chapter.
ICan'tDecideWhatMyPenNameIs 2008-07-14 ch 6,	abuseThat chapter was hilarious, i LOVED the interaction between Kai and Claire. Update soon please. Song Of The Sparrow
supernae 2008-07-14 ch 6,	abuseI loled at "PWNT" I also loled at Claire extreme sarcasm. Oh, I adored this chapter. It's too funny! I am SO happy that you updated! yay! Can't wait for the next chapter!
becca 2008-07-10 ch 4, anon.	abuseoh wow! plz update soon coz i luv this story
BlueCupcakes 2008-06-30 ch 5, anon.	abuseSo sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. :( Anyway! I effing love Ann. She PWNS. BIG TIME. Srzly, she does. Sucks for Claire, not being able to enjoy summer since the stupid dog broke her toes. Can't wait for Kai to show up, even though I already know how Claire is going to act. Bwhahaha! ;D OMG. Hopefully it doesn't say I can't review cuz that will totally bum my day. Srzly.
Jake 2008-06-26 ch 5, anon.	abuseJen, I really, really enjoyed reading this! I don't know if its just because its been so long since ive read anything from this series and the anticipation has built up, or if its from your great use of images and words! ie: "...where my shoes waited patiently for me every morning"; I love this! Its so good to see you having fun with what you write, and it also makes seemingly everyday, boring objects or actions seem a little more then just plain and simple. Ann's pov was very well done. Its pretty clear how she feels about Jack, but it makes me wonder; does Jack know? Does he like her too? I hope you flesh it out a little more, but I understand if you don't. There are already a few other love stories going on around claires, and you may not want to distract from the main plot just yet. I loved the library scene! I forget the librarians name... But I'm already in love with her. I think if I was a character in your story, I'd definately have a crush on her. :D I love where this is going, and you don't know how much I enjoy reading these chapters on my phone at work on a particularly slow or groggy morning. Keep them coming! That's an order! (notice I didn't mention your grammar ;) ..)
Muu-chan 2008-06-22 ch 5,	abuseYay Kai's in it now! xD I realized I never reviewed for the last two chapters. I really spaced. I can't wait to find out how you make Claire and Kai meet. ^_^
Flying Gummybears 2008-06-21 ch 5,	abuseYAY! KAI'S FINALLY HERE! -squeal- Er, excuse the fan-girl-ness words that I just typed and literally acted out in real life... 0.o But, yeahs. I sort of missed the review on the last chapter (which I even READ before this update) and it must have slipped my mind to review the last one xP Sorry! I'll try to make this an extra-long review for compensation. Okay, so... Claire. Doctor Tim. Eh, it seems more of a good friendship rather than true love. But then again, that's what arranged marriages are mostly like these days, huh? At least in my opinion they are, having known some couples with arranged marriages. And... Popuri. Hate her. Yeahs. Don't even get me started on KaiPuri 'cause I'll throw a FIT! I swear. They are just too... alike to even be compatible with one another. They do not clash or have opposite personalities (such as Ann & Cliff) that make them attracted to each other. Thank Goddess they created Claire. She is a better match than Popuri ever will be to Kai. Well, uh, I sort have started rambling... Hehe, sorry! Okays, uh... I'm going to be all BETA-PERSON-Y on you right now so brace yourself for the impact: #1: Quite a number of spelling errors or incorrect word usage (example: you used 'waist' in the sentence "I am way too stubborn to even waist my time" when it should have been 'waste') #2: Grammar errors That is all. I'm sorry for the criticism, it makes me feel rather mean! Update soon, please!
10Join-Fei 2008-06-21 ch 5,	abuseI'm really enjoying this... I think you had an inconsinsity with the sketch pad (I belive you stated Claire couldnt draw in chapter one, but I might be mistaken) anyway, I'm not a big KaixClaire fan, but I like the story 10join fei
supernae 2008-06-21 ch 5,	abuseyay Ann! she "used to feel sorry" for Cliff. I can totally understand that. It is pathetic. I do love Cliff, but yeah. He is pretty sad and stuff. Poor Claire! Her toe broken all summer! I suppose Doc will help her tend to it, and that will be cute and all, but Kai will really help her have fun, and that will be cute, too. you rock! I'm always so happy when I get the email that you've updated your fic. Can't wait for the next chapter!~
Jean Cooper 2008-06-21 ch 5,	abusewow...Jen you do an awesome job at writing all your characters in a very real way, and I hate your ability to do so XP whatever..I love you so much and I'm glad you showed the writers block whose boss! I can't wait for you to write more. Good luck and I wish you tons of reviews ^^ Val
HmGirly 2008-06-11 ch 4,	abuseAw :) I've never really read all that much ClairexDoctor, but I'm hanging out for that as a final pairing. Of course, I may change my mind when Kai comes into it more, but... I love Jack and Claire's relationship, too. So cute. Hannah.
cute-stack-twin 2008-06-03 ch 3,	abuseWhen I read the part about the Vicodin, I was thinking "I swear I've heard this story somewhere before..." I'm glad you cleared that up, because that would've bugged me for the rest of my life!! I love how you made Claire, she is friggin' awesome. She is in no way Mary-Sue-ish and she reminds me of my older sister. Love the story, great job!!
Major Lynette 2008-06-02 ch 4,	abuseGreat chapter! I liked the slight fluff at the end... Sweeny Todd. LOL.

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