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Reviews for: The Burdens of Being Functional
Zoe
2009-07-30 . chapter 2
I really never just close my eyes and sit there for a few minutes after I read stories, but this story is just so... calm. Perfect, in some ways, and pleasant to read.

I am not a major fan of Snape/Hermione; I find it unobjectionable if Hermione is of age, but the pairing alone is not enough to make a story interesting.
As well, I have had experiences with stories where the flashbacks went on far, far too long, and every non-oneshot story with flashbacks throughout it that I have come across, I have abandoned in sheer frustration with the plot interruptions.
However, you managed to bring this all together quite, quite well, and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I shall be looking out for your other works in the future.
Texas Dragon
2008-10-09 . chapter 2
Wow that was pretty deep. But let me ask you what are you ever gonna do that lasts longer than life?
Aldara
2008-06-09 . chapter 2
This is really beautiful. ^^
Maddie50
2008-05-08 . chapter 2
Oh, well done. An excellent example of a "best friend" who is actually in love with his friend but settles for friendship just to be close. I'm glad that Hermione eventually sees that he loves her, and when she thinks about it always has.
latinachikita
2008-05-04 . chapter 2
Aw I like this story! I love how you switch back and forth, from past to present! Keep up the awesome work and update sooN!



Sarah
aptteach123
2008-05-03 . chapter 2
Awesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
tambrathegreat
2008-05-03 . chapter 2
As usual, a flawless chapter that speaks of pain and loss in near poetic language. I love your writing.
notwritten
2008-05-02 . chapter 2
You have written a striking, and peachy chapter. Have a noteworthy weekend. Keep smiling, and gleaming. :-)
FarmerLiz
2008-05-02 . chapter 2
God, this is beautiful and heart breaking and just . . . wow. I didn't review the first chapter, but this chapter more than lives up to the promise of the first. Eagerly awaiting more. . .

Liz
Kyone
2008-05-02 . chapter 2
Thank you, this is beautiful.
Tu lo sai inc.
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
I hope you will continue this!
Samilia
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
Beautiful story! I am eagarly awaiting more!
aptteach123
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
Awesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
notwritten
2008-04-25 . chapter 1
This is a pleasant, and diverting chapter. Have a peaceful weekend. Keep smiling, and let the sun shine down on you. Are there any more chapters headed our way for us to read, please and thank you. :-)
tambrathegreat
2008-04-25 . chapter 1
I always love your writing. This is just fabulous. I loved Padma's ideas about the Unspeakables. It might have worked if Snape hadn't foiled Hermione. Funny stuff.
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