Why did you stop writing this story? I really liked it. And it's good and cool and can go a lot of places so I think you should continue writing this story.

great story!

I like how they told her as a pack and not just Quil. It was original and clever!

cool. not corny, AMAZING

aw-ness!

keep writing! no matter how many shiny objects there are! write!

as long as its legible grammer's a who-carez 4 me.

LUV THE STARTER!

love the story so far. please continue it!
~Sloan

i like it

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keep it going and f.y.i : i love Austin Cunningham!

:D

please update... it has been a while since you have!

Very, cute. Yeah, we all have corny moments, but whatever, it only means we have to work harder and get better. Keep it up and update soon!

this is awesome corntaculer to be exact so obviously i LOVE contaculer chapters!

loved it please add more soon

good job. but i thought quil and the others didn't get older. just wondering

I love your story! I hope to see more. You are excellent! I love how your writing form Clare's perspective cause we probably won't ever really hear her story. So I'm glad your telling it. :D

k i really like ur story and ur writing style. i hav 1 question, in chapter 3 u mentioned a Mr. Baldwin, is there any reason for that? im just curious, i tend to question little details like that.