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| Snake of the Rose 2008-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseOkay, first and foremost. Invisable = Invisible and Cerinian. Change those, and this story puts mine to shame. Fan-freakin'-tastic! You're pulling out all of the old school Star Fox references, and I'm extremely impressed. Just those spelling errors threw me off, but this is story is just...Wow! I'm too speechless to give a full review. But please, update soon! In Awe, -Snake of the Rose |