Reviews for No Need for Nerima

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PEJP Bengtzone 2008-09-03 ch 1,	abusePlease, continue; we want to see more of this story. More chapters to read. Make Ranma return to his home world. Let Tenchi and Ryoko teach Ranma, how to fight in sword-based combats. I don't care if you put Sailor Moon and the Sailor Senshi, just keep updating, please? Anyway, good luck, and keep going on!
RanmaChaos 2008-08-31 ch 13,	abuseGreat chapter!!Please continue to UPDATE!!
Pasencore 2008-08-16 ch 13,	abuseGreat chapter! It's the third story I've read using «Genma's Daughter», it seemed to have made an impression in it's time :) I really like that story. Keep up the good work, you are doing fantastic. Hope the next chapter comes up soon.
tatewaki2000 2008-08-15 ch 6,	abuseWONDERFUL! This chappy was the clincher. :) i love this fic :)
Anime-Freak317 2008-08-15 ch 13,	abuseI really hope there is a point to having Tenchi and Ranma in alt-verses. I can see the ideals behind it, but why do it anyway? It seems to take away from the main story. I hope to see some main reasons in the next chapter.
borg rabbit 2008-08-14 ch 13,	abuseSweet chapter. I reaaly enjoyed reading Genma's daughter. This is the first Farscape vignette that I have seen. It'd be nice to see a Ranma/Farscape xover. Ciao
Awey 2008-08-14 ch 13,	abuseHeh, someone's a fan of 'Genma's Daughter.'
ranma girl 14 2008-08-13 ch 13,	abuseNice chapter, can't wait to see where Sasami and the others were taken to. plz plz plz update soon! ^_^
Campin' Carl 2008-08-13 ch 13,	abuseThe girls are weak mantra that Ranma has is just fandom; possibly the most annoying bit about Ranma fandom, I think. I actually have a review to another story a while back that would reaffirm what you're wondering: "Ranma has NEVER once said that. If this held even close to true, then how did he acquire an assassin in Shampoo? How did he fight Kodachi without actually fighting her if he doesn't fight girls? He had no problem fighting Herb before he found out that he was really male. It was only the last half of the fight against Herb where Ranma found out he was really male; until then, he thought he was a girl. He fought Kiima in a midair battle and won that, too. He also fought Pink and Link, and they were about to kill Shampoo." I'm fairly sure in my revising that I accidentally left the "and they were about to kill Shampoo" part, because something else I mentioned in the review apparently got copied twice. Ranma has no negative opinions on women fighters, though. Anyway, I really liked the Genma's Daughter thing, and was kind of surprised I picked up on what it was in the second scene involving them, before she started playing violin. I have no information on the series Tenchi ended up in, though, so it's kind of annoying (on my end).
Jerry Unipeg 2008-08-13 ch 13,	abuseI LOVE THIS CHAPTER! (*x5) Great meeting between Ranma and Ranko.
Gangsta Spanksta 2008-08-13 ch 13, anon.	abuseYou're a fairly decent writer -- no complaints here. Just about the only thing I'd like to point out is that you have not learned how to handle interruptions in speech correctly. It's a minor thing, but you are trying to handle those by using commas when you should be using dashes. For example: "...I'm just a scaredy c, ca, cat,” should be, "...I'm just a scaredy c-- ca-- cat," or "what, what," while it could be technically correct, you probably meant to do, "what-- what." The dash is the interruptive stylistical mark, while the ellipses is the trailing-off stylistical mark when used in dialog; both will add some style to your writing, which is what you were trying to use commas for.
Lerris 2008-08-13 ch 13,	abuseThe biggest thing I saw was the bit where Ranma sees an anime of Tenchi Muyo. I think that was a mistake, since it becomes very difficult to suspend disbelief and just enjoy the story when you have already incorporated Tenchi Muyo.
Wonderbee31 2008-08-13 ch 13,	abuseInteresting to see the two universes here, and can't wait to see how Tenchi handles his while Ranma looks to be getting twisted about as well.
calamite 2008-08-13 ch 13,	abuseAnother great chapter keep it up Calamite
Kagegakure no Sato 2008-08-13 ch 7,	abuseNice chapter. Different but nice. Can't really think of anything that needs improvement. Though I do have a question abou upcoming characters. Washu is always a must, but if this deals with 'Tenchi Universe' as well as 'Tenchi Muyo' does that mean Kiyone will appear too? Now I kow you said that Ranma ight not have a pairing but personally think he should. Though you are right on how it shouldn't be a Ranma-verse girl maybe it should be a Tenchi-verse girl. I can only think of 2 girls that would fit Ranma. The first would be Mihoshi but she seems to have a thing for Tenchi, so instead how about Kiyone(if she's in this fic)? I mean she's hard-working has a good job, great, if somewhat stressful, personality, has big goal, also, and heres the kicker, she's a GP officer! The last one MIGHT work, which is Sasami whose reasons I have already listed. So anyway those are my thoughts E-mail me and tell me what you think about my pairing ideas. Well Ja. ;)

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