 TenWings 2009-11-11 . chapter 17UPDATE SOON! |
 Gelionlegends 2009-10-09 . chapter 17nice chapter though i think you get that a lot from everyone as well as looking forward to the next installment.
though i always wondered about washus lab as i thought she could take her lab with her just lock/seal the one on earth or take it with her and place it on a ship or such.
though i really wish to see what washu and others think of ranmas cheetah hybrid form. that and ranma getting to use it as it does have a lot of uses now, though i was surprised he didn't recognise that his new body has an even larger well of power, though when he gets the gem maybehe will transform to that form?
so the next installment will be going through the tenchi universe line?
what about the gold diggers will ranma and crew meet up with them during a later chapter say with them in a tight spot and use the dimenion hop/transporter to escape for a little while and go and meet up with them?
sort of imaging the scene with gina meeting washu and then gina trying to charge washu for the damages to her lab from rin-oky eating it.
plus what sort of weapons does rin-oky now have from what i understand she did eat gina betatech lab and thats got a lot of powerful items in besides weapons plus defencive betatech, how will it measure up to ryo-oky and jurian first and second generation ships with that tech.
let fly the shadow rings? |
 Guardoflight 2009-10-09 . chapter 17A very, very interesting story with some unexpected turn of events, well thought out and well written. I look forward to your next chapter. |
 Bobboky 2009-10-06 . chapter 17awesome |
 ShineX 2009-09-22 . chapter 17This is very good, I assume that the change in species has more to it than just what you wanted? Since whatever that guy does to control Ryoko depends on her being what she is would probably act differently on Ranma. Kind of an interesting concept... |
 ShineX 2009-09-22 . chapter 16This was very well done |
 ShineX 2009-09-22 . chapter 15So this is off a manga? Sweet, I thought it was just off of the fanfic The Black Paw |
 ShineX 2009-09-22 . chapter 14Well this was a confusing chapter, lol |
 ShineX 2009-09-21 . chapter 12Let me guess, Genma's Daughter? |
 ShineX 2009-09-21 . chapter 11Very nicely done |
 ShineX 2009-09-21 . chapter 10Nice, it would make sense to make Ryoga a non-human too considering he's supposed to be a near equal to Ranma. Good work |
 ShineX 2009-09-20 . chapter 8Nicely played, it explains not pairing Ryoko and Ranma |
 ShineX 2009-09-19 . chapter 6This was a very good chapter. The idea of Ranma going to school as a girl was pretty good, considering Ranma isn't worrying about going there for long it would make sense to try to be in the background. As to the adoption, that's pretty good too, the only thing I question I'd have for that is why his girl form looks so much like Nodoka. One of the major perks about that is most people would feel a lot less atachment to that name after they were informed of that fact. Overall, I'd say the whole story has been really good, the only thing I gotta say so far is: I hope you have a good ending, because a Ryoko/Ranma pairing is looking pretty good so far |
 ShineX 2009-09-19 . chapter 4You've brought in two landmarks in one chapter. Nice job, hope you did well in making them work out |
 ShineX 2009-09-19 . chapter 3hm... I guess I could see him knowing that Ranma could do that, but, you're right, he probably wouldn't be angry about it. He does need someone to spar with though... |