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| Wonderbee31 2008-07-25 ch 11, | abuseVery good part here, and enjoying the Ranma/Nodoka, Ranma/Washu interaction here, and can't wait to see what happens when Ranma meets Nodoka's family later on. |
| Kagegakure no Sato 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story you have here! There aren't that many good 'Ranma 1/2' 'Tenchi Muyo' crossovers out there and this one seems really good. I'll be reviewing the other chapters soon so I have only question to ask right now. My question is what the pairing will be for Ranma. Nothing personal to the 'Ranma 1/2' girls but I hope it's not them, reason for that is they seem to see Ranma as nothing more as a prize to be won. The RanmaxTenchi crossover fics I've read usually pair Ranma up with either Sasami or Mihoshi. Personally I think Sasami would be a good choice b/c she has that spark and could probably help Ranma with his problems and although she looks so young she is over 500 years old as we both know. I think the Juraians have a sort of 'thing', for a lack of a better word, like Washu has that makes them look younger than they are...okay that made no sense. Okay I think they can choose how fast they 'mature' in a sense is what I'm trying to say. Look I know the pairing is your choice I'm just saying who I think should be paired up. So anyway can't wait to read more so keep up the good work! Ja Matta. ;) |
| DeltaRyujin 2008-07-21 ch 11, | abuseVery nice development you got me reading till high hours in the morning just to finish the chapters. The first Ranma/Tenchi Xover i have ever read that implies the level of blending you are showing. Hope you can continue with the story since the last update noted is from april. |
| StarfireGreencoon 2008-07-19 ch 11, | abuseDon't be. Genma IS a bastard. I mean tieing his own kid in fish sausage and tossing him into a pit of starving cats? UGH! |
| GJMEGA 2008-07-17 ch 2, | abuse"Which makes a certain amount of sense since Genma would be a cheap idiot and take the shortest boat/flight which would put them on the western side of japan then have to travel east." um... they swam. Insane, I know, but true. |
| gaul1 2008-07-17 ch 11, | abusegood chapter, keep up the good work, byes |
| Karuma Kinsei 2008-07-17 ch 11, | abuseNice chapter, and personally I'm happy Genma got away. Everyone always harps on him being such a horrible person, he is not, he's just a complete and utter idiot. I would like to find out who messed him up so much as a kid though. Besides 10 yrs raising a kid on the open road the kid grows up to have strong morals, strong sense or honor, and kickass martial art skills. Sounds like he did good to me. |
| Jaaku-san 2008-07-17 ch 11, anon. | abuseYou know, for the longest time I've been avoiding reading this fic because I was afraid it was going to be the Ranma series, just with the Tenchi females added to the fun. I am very, very happy to have been wrong, and I find myself enjoying this cross immensely. I hope you continue it for a while. :D |
| Nth 2008-07-17 ch 11, anon. | abuseMake the tail real when Ranma's a girl. Can't have a decent catgirl without the tail... |
| Jerry Unipeg 2008-07-17 ch 11, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Nice new look for Ranma. |
| Digineko1a 2008-07-17 ch 11, | abuseGreat Story, Please update. Thanks |
| ranma girl 14 2008-07-16 ch 11, | abuseNice chapter, I wonder if Ranma will meet Nodoka's family and if Inuyasha is still alive. plz plz plz update soon! ^_^ |
| Lerris 2008-07-16 ch 11, | abuseYour story seems to be lacking a bit of focus. You have a lot of pieces and details, including some which just seem out of left field, like making Genma not only an evil bastard, but a bit of a pervert as well. Others, like Nodoka's family tree look like they might be going somewhere, but it seems an odd mix when Ranma's goal is to get out in space.. Good luck with this.. |
| Anonymou 2008-07-16 ch 11, anon. | abuseAnother nice chapter. I was the one who said that Washu didn't use any advanced medical equipment. However, my argument stems from reading the manga Tenchi Muyo. Since you've never once mentioned about the manga, I'm assuming that you've never read it before. Further proof is the family tree, as in the manga, Ryoko had a sister named Minagi. The content of my argument is that in the manga Minagi, Ryoko's sister, was seriously hurt. At that time, the Tenchi cast was on board a ship that was fairly advance even by Jurai standards (Can't remember the name of the ship for the life of me since I last read it nearly three years ago). However, when Washu took one look at the equipment, she said that they were outdated. I'm talking about medical equipments that are around ten to fifteen generations into the future, and Washu was complaining they were outdated; usable but outdated. |
| Innortal 2008-07-16 ch 11, | abuseFun episode once again, great fusion. |