this is funny. But the poor mouse!

The sadist in me is pleased. I thank you.

Hahahha... I loved this! It's totally random, but so much fun!

On behalf of all men everywhere, I agree with Malfoy when I quote [your quote] “You should know you never insult a man’s manliness. It’s just not right.”

Boo, I like this. It was very "cute" and humorous and not "too" girly. ;) However, Malfoy screaming like a little girl [while funny] made me pity all metro men out there.

Now for my special brand of critique [I call it Kean's Quickies]... [What?]

You utilise nice, descriptive imagery without having to go overboard. [He seemed to be sincere with his fear, though, and was now attempting to pull off his robe in the hopes of getting it away from him. That didn’t seem to do much, as the little mouse seemed determined not to be flung recklessly with the heavy robe, and had decided to escape into his pants instead. Ginny saw his eyes widen in horror, and he let out his most girlish shriek yet as he started fumbling with his belt, determined to keep the mouse away from his family jewels.] What is not to like about these two lines? They involve pants and family jewels!

[The smarmy git’s head was shoved so far up his behind that she doubted he listened to any thing else besides his own voice] While undoubtedly painful [and would be a muffled voice at that], I like how you demonstrate the Gryffindor's voice in this.

[Draco edged back in disgust. “What’s wrong with you? Don’t wave that thing at me!”] I feel like this should be HER line. [Smirks]

All in all, I liked it. Now you must take that talent of yours and write me some action stories. Soothing action action action! [Random. Sorry.]

I know you do not like to write smut so I will settle for action. [Nods]

Kean

*laughs* Kim, this is fantastically funny. Awesome! *laughs again*

It's so great that you got Draco's snarky, annoying nature – AND his fear of something so ridiculous together so perfectly... and I thought the idea itself was just hilarious.

Ginny is great, too! I like how you said that she explained her kissing him back as a reaction to shock. ;P

Awesome!

HAHA that was awesome. Kinda ooc obviously, but who cares? It was awesome. Thanks for the laughs and the mental images of a half-naked Malfoy squealing at mice...

That was adorably cute!

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

So wait, did he put the mouse there? Probably not, I'm just tired lol

That was so much fun, I enjoyed it immensely! lol. It was so funny. lol. Ah, good times...

Really cute I wish Ginny would have told Draco what she was afraid of thought maybe in chapter two lol love the scream coming form Draco I felt like I could hear it lol GREAT STORY

This is just cute. I really liked it.

cute.

I would love to hear the unmanly squeeling

haha this one was so random! i love it!