Andre was Jareth, yes? I loved it.

Wow. Why does this sound so horrifyingly creepy in the Olde Worlde Way of Fairy Tales?

On a side note, the idea is very intriguing and original. I liked the characters, Sarah and Andre and Jareth. I loved how you introduced Andre to the story but I especially adored the subtle hints of his true identity and the confusion that follows. And I loved the tiny details you added, especially the eye thing. Truthfully, I don't think I caught that.

I can sort of guess the plot...but I feel that the conflict hasn't been finished, that there's still tension in it. Or, maybe I'm just a sap who wants happy endings in stories...

With that said, what the hell actually happened? What I can guess is this seems to be some sort of trap for poor Sarah. Oversensitivity to stimuli could be a spell to confuse her or it could be her insincts warning her. I'm pretty sure Andre is the real Jareth and the second Jareth is merely the outer body...? This could be Jareth's way of invading her world, through another face and on her terms/domain...

But...can you clarify for me...? Thanks very much!

Very, very thought-provoking. I somehow think this is just a ploy from the GK, and that both Andre and the teen-Jareth are simply facets of the original. I mean, it seems as if the Jareth look-a-like actually grinned in triumph when Sarah chose Andre during the dance scene?

But... I'd like to hear your take. Erm... explanation, s'il vous plait? I'm still musing here.
But all in all, a very good read! :D

-Suzu

Oh, I like stories,wich make me chew upon. My alternatives: 1. Andre is Jareth, and teeny-J is just an illusion. A great illusion, and while the whole school could seen him, J is far better than Uri Geller and David Copperfield jointly.
2.OK, I have to admit,I have this feeling, that both Andre and Jareth is just the product of Sarah's imagination." Blond hair fell over her shoulder, but she was the only thing reflected in the mirror." Hm?

I truly enjoyed your story.

I definitely had to make an effort to make sense of what was going on in the story, considering Andre seemed to act like the Goblin King, but then the "King" himself appears! In the end, though, my first thought was "Wow. Wow." Wonderful characterizations of everyone, and the way the GK snared Sarah was ingenious. I was skeptical about a plot taking place in a high school setting, but you pulled it off perfectly. I was totally hooked from the beginning. Thank you for sharing this story.

bwuah?
D:
That confused me greatly. Very interesting though.

Hm...odd...but very good! And...I hope that coming-soon update still applies...fabulous job as usual!
- Kat

I just read "Mirror." At the end, you left an author's note that you'd be more than happy to explain the story. If you're still around and checking reviews, I'd really love that explanation.

I have two possible takes on what's going on: Take #1: Both Jareth and Andre are the Goblin King, but the Goblin King has somehow been severed into two, his conflicting feelings for Sarah separated into two beings. Take #2: Andre is the true Goblin King and HighSchooler!Jareth is some sort of imposter.

*writhe* Explanation please.

P.S. Thank you for making me scratch my head over this fic.

very good.
:D

Is andre really a part of jareth or something? or is he another fae? Im kinda baffled, to use ur choice of words.

hmm jareth in a uniform...im ok with that =D.

And I'm writing this review a couple months after I first read it. XD

I love this story. Sure it's abstract, but that only adds to the mystery. It's a shame that it's only a one shot, but it's complete as it is.

Wow, great. Jareth's Andre, right? And since he is such a master of illusion, he made himself an illusion? Great concept, love your writing.

Confusing once you reach a certain point but you planned that, didn't you? A delicious story to read, yes, very enjoyable. Sarah is in-character, and her circumstances are wonderfully just out of her control, without making her a puppet.

Nice! Fun story. Very interesting.

Defiantely have to say that this is one of your best works. I love the abstractness, I love the twists and turns and I love how confusing it is! I have my own theories about Andre and Jareth but of course I'm not 100% sure what your personal vision was for who they are. I'd be interested to hear it. I think this works really well as a one shot but it also has the potential for a much longer adventure. Thank you so much for writing this! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!