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| Maureen Elphaba Thropp 2008-07-10 ch 24, | abuseheya. i'm back. i was just checking my email and saw that u updated comfort, care and love - i cried at this chapter. i love it so much. i want 2 know if sara, mark and april are okay - update soon! from, m.e.t. aka sara |
| Maureen Olivia Lockhart 2008-07-10 ch 24, | abuseUgh, I knew you'd do something like this. Both the baby and April? |
| gilmoreluver06 2008-07-10 ch 24, | abuseaww poor baby how will life be for them how will April take it? |
| gilmoreluver06 2008-07-07 ch 23, | abuseMark is becoming a big softie lol yea right its his allergies he was crying |
| Maureen Olivia Lockhart 2008-07-06 ch 23, | abuse“My allergies are acting up.” Mark answered quickly. Aha, I love Mark. And again, another great chapter! |
| XDjoeyjonasXD 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was reely good. Keep writing because ur awesome!XD |
| Maureen Elphaba Thropp 2008-07-03 ch 23, | abusethat was simply awesome! i loved it! update soon (or if u want me to, i would be more than happy to. i have a great idea for the next chapt. anyway) talk to u online tonite! from, m.e.t. aka sara |
| Maureen Elphaba Thropp 2008-06-15 ch 22, anon. | abusethis chapt. was good - update soon! |
| Maureen Olivia Lockhart 2008-06-14 ch 22, | abuseAww, you better not kill anyone or I will not be a happy camper. Ha, so anyway, I think you should write more story in each chapter. As much as I love the way you incorporate the songs, they're overpowering the story. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| gilmoreluver06 2008-06-13 ch 22, | abusewhat will Mark's reaction be? will April be more than happy to save a life? how will sara take the news will she love April forever and they become like the best of friends and wants to help out April as much as she can when the baby is born? will sara love the baby as her own and be like a second mother? how will Mark take this? how will april and roger take this? will roger allow mark to stay at the loft and be more than happy to let sara move in and mark and roger become friends again and mark appoligizes to roger and april about everything that happened with them |
| gilmoreluver06 2008-06-12 ch 21, | abuse1. when will they find out what the sex is? 2. will there be a baby shower for April? 3. who will throw/organize it? 4. will Roger take April baby shopping so she can pick out things that she likes and may need for the baby? 5. will her girlfriends take her to the mall for a girl's day out? 6. will Roger and his guys have a man's day out? 7. will April and her girls like go to a spa for a relaxing day? 8. will Roger and his friends go to a baseball/hockey/basketball/football game? 9. will Roger scream at April when he gets the credit card bill or will he be like its all worth it for the baby 10. will April make a list and send Roger out shopping for stuff for the baby 11. Will we ever get to meet Roger's parents? 12. what do they think of April and the baby? |
| Maureen Olivia Lockhart 2008-06-11 ch 21, | abuseRoger has got to be the fastest song writer ever. |
| Maureen Elphaba Thropp 2008-06-11 ch 21, anon. | abusethis was a really cute chapt. - i liked it a lot! 2 questions - what happened w/ sara and is she gonna be okay? update soon! from, sara aka maureen elphaba thropp |
| gilmoreluver06 2008-06-09 ch 20, | abuseplease don't let her die I don't think I will be able to handle of she died and I hope that April name the baby after her. I think it would be cute and a really sweet memory. I think Roger should come up with the idea and April loves it and agree's to it. How will Mark handle it will be say aww good or NO HOW COULD U DO THAT it brings back memories of her everytime he see's the baby |
| Maureen Elphaba Thropp 2008-06-09 ch 20, anon. | abuseheya! just got back from the trip. at home now, checking emails. this story is really good so far - keep it up! i've never heard this song before, but it seems cool. can't wait to chat 2nite! i'll log on as soon as i'm done checking emails and stuff. anyway, please let sara get better soon! i'm really worried about her. i thought of another song u could use in this story - amazed by lonestar. c u soon! from, maureen elphaba thropp aka sara |