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Reviews For: The Squid Ate My Slipper

Makurayami Ookami
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseha ha! that was good. sorry. the story title really got me. this was good. well written.
ShellyD1982
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abusewell what a nice little story that made me laugh a lot

I like that U made remus the dom in this and Severus the sub and that sev threw tantrums. that made me laugh the most, picturing Severus Snape throwing a tantrum like a child.

and the other thing that made me laugh was when Severus told Remus that he gave the slipper to the gaint squid for a chew toy lol

A great, funny story
SevSnape123
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abusegreat story. :) you should do at least one more chapter for tomorrow and maybe the next day but AT LEAST tomorrow ;)
LacklusterSnape
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is awesome, please continue this as a series!
Heksie
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseyou got a good idee, but use Rumes view point instead of a 3rd party's.

It might bring the emosion that you want more forward.
angelinvestigationsfan
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseAnother good story. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
JWOHPfan
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseI loved that! Nice to see Sev as a sub, especially with Remus as his dom, too perfect! Will there be more? I hope so. ;)
Tellwyn Prince
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseHah! This was wonderful, as always, and exactly what should have happened!

Thank you thank you!! And please hit me up for a reciprical story!!
supergirl3684
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abusethat was great hun! since there's not *complete* on tome does that mean we'll get more? please?
CrimsonTearsKK
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abusei really think that you should do another chapter for the next spanking coming tomorrow night possibly the next night. please.

i loved it. you are a excellent writer
hug-me
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abusea great story! i love all your stories so much! you have put on your user page that you will take requests for stories, if it is ok i would like to make a request! please PM me if this is ok!
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