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| Makurayami Ookami 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseha ha! that was good. sorry. the story title really got me. this was good. well written. |
| ShellyD1982 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abusewell what a nice little story that made me laugh a lot I like that U made remus the dom in this and Severus the sub and that sev threw tantrums. that made me laugh the most, picturing Severus Snape throwing a tantrum like a child. and the other thing that made me laugh was when Severus told Remus that he gave the slipper to the gaint squid for a chew toy lol A great, funny story |
| SevSnape123 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abusegreat story. :) you should do at least one more chapter for tomorrow and maybe the next day but AT LEAST tomorrow ;) |
| LacklusterSnape 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome, please continue this as a series! |
| Heksie 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseyou got a good idee, but use Rumes view point instead of a 3rd party's. It might bring the emosion that you want more forward. |
| angelinvestigationsfan 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseAnother good story. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :) |
| JWOHPfan 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI loved that! Nice to see Sev as a sub, especially with Remus as his dom, too perfect! Will there be more? I hope so. ;) |
| Tellwyn Prince 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseHah! This was wonderful, as always, and exactly what should have happened! Thank you thank you!! And please hit me up for a reciprical story!! |
| supergirl3684 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abusethat was great hun! since there's not *complete* on tome does that mean we'll get more? please? |
| CrimsonTearsKK 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abusei really think that you should do another chapter for the next spanking coming tomorrow night possibly the next night. please. i loved it. you are a excellent writer |
| hug-me 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abusea great story! i love all your stories so much! you have put on your user page that you will take requests for stories, if it is ok i would like to make a request! please PM me if this is ok! |