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| RossN 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseA very moving piece. I think you have captured Atia and her feelings perfectly. |
| xio11 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI have just one word for this... beautiful. |
| kishiria 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseHurray! Well-written, in-character, and you managed to show the roots of their love/hate relationship from the very first scene. At the end it comes full-circle: "Don't you dare." Great job. |
| Boscobel 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseNormally I'm pretty good at explaining exactly why I loved a certain fanfic, but seriously, all I could say after reading this was a wordless AH of amazement. OMG. This is genius. Everything about it. Rome meets Joy Luck Club -- cutting, forthright, real. I love it. |
| EmCity 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. Atia is my absolute favorite character and you capture her, and Octavia, beautifully. |
| Juliefan 2008-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMNg I love Atia-Octavia interaction and I hope you'll continue the good work! |
| Laine Montgomery 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is astonishing! Wonderful characterization of both Atia and Octavia; Atia as the story's speaker was both compelling and crystal clear. I liked the structuring of the story too -- the short "chapters" kept the story chronological while maintaining focus on the mother-daughter relationship. Congratulations on a job well done! |