nice continue

Another good chapter. Been a while since you updated, didn't recognize the title when I got the email for the update...need to do some updating of my own. Hope you update again soon!

What's in the wardrobe? Passage to Narnia? You need to update chica, LOL. Good story so far, you've got Owen down pretty well.

I think you need to update soon and get them out of there before something bad happens.

Judy

so far so good. i wonder whats going to happen :D

more please x

Kyle seems to have an almost hypnotic way of putting people at ease, even those who are alert to danger such as Gwen. I'm very intrigued and can't wait for another update. By the way, where is my Ianto in all of this?

Judy

this is really good.

more please.

x

aww great story! please continue! cant wait to read more ;)