 Medicinal Biscuit 2009-11-27 . chapter 1love it, love your writing. continue if you ever get a chance! |
 Letta 2009-11-13 . chapter 1Normally I don't like stories that are primarily dialogue, but you write it in such a way that it works. Also, I love your humor. |
 ishala8 2009-11-06 . chapter 1Hahaha! I've got no idea how you do it, but it is just too funny to read! Thank you for making my day. |
 Dysgrammatophobia 2009-09-24 . chapter 1This is hilarious. I can't wait to see where you take this next. |
 Sweet Smiles 2009-08-29 . chapter 1oh i like this i cant wait for the next chapter! already added this to my c2.
update soon please :) love your style of writing :D |
 Trinity Fenton-Phantom 2009-08-15 . chapter 1great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Does Naruto know his heritage? If not, he should. He should meet Roshi and see Shizumebachi again. |
 Wordsplat 2009-08-01 . chapter 1awesome. just. plain. awesome. |
 shenmi meiren 2009-07-19 . chapter 1... you're so right about your sense of humor...
... but what does it mean if i find it really amusing?? |
 Book Mad TJ 2009-06-25 . chapter 1This is really interesting... |
 NarutoVixin 2009-06-19 . chapter 1please tell me there are more chapters couse this was good |
 wittyying 2009-06-19 . chapter 1Nice boob discussion. Hehe... |
 All 2009-05-20 . chapter 1 This is hilarious! |
 Penbrydd 2009-05-13 . chapter 1“I do not sound like Raido,” Kotetsu said huffily. “Raido is a sexually frustrated nice guy, whereas I am a liberator of love.[...]"
Holy shit, I think I just died laughing. I know for a fact that I have whisky up my nose, and it may or may not be on the keyboard. This promises to be wholly ridiculous, and I heartily approve. |
 Janneia 2009-04-27 . chapter 1*jawdrops, gasps and then attempts to muffles laughter* And this was only the first part. YOU ARE A VERITABLE GENIUS. GENIUS. I say. ^-^ |
 moonymonster 2009-03-26 . chapter 1*can't stop giggling* I hope, hope, HOPE there will be more of this. Who is Kotetsu? (Yeah, I know. Like I said, almost every website I like's been blocked, even OneManga! *sigh*) |