love it, love your writing. continue if you ever get a chance!

Normally I don't like stories that are primarily dialogue, but you write it in such a way that it works. Also, I love your humor.

Hahaha! I've got no idea how you do it, but it is just too funny to read! Thank you for making my day.

This is hilarious. I can't wait to see where you take this next.

oh i like this i cant wait for the next chapter! already added this to my c2.

update soon please :) love your style of writing :D

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Does Naruto know his heritage? If not, he should. He should meet Roshi and see Shizumebachi again.

awesome. just. plain. awesome.

... you're so right about your sense of humor...

... but what does it mean if i find it really amusing??

This is really interesting...

please tell me there are more chapters couse this was good

Nice boob discussion. Hehe...

This is hilarious!

“I do not sound like Raido,” Kotetsu said huffily. “Raido is a sexually frustrated nice guy, whereas I am a liberator of love.[...]"

Holy shit, I think I just died laughing. I know for a fact that I have whisky up my nose, and it may or may not be on the keyboard. This promises to be wholly ridiculous, and I heartily approve.

*jawdrops, gasps and then attempts to muffles laughter* And this was only the first part. YOU ARE A VERITABLE GENIUS. GENIUS. I say. ^-^

*can't stop giggling* I hope, hope, HOPE there will be more of this. Who is Kotetsu? (Yeah, I know. Like I said, almost every website I like's been blocked, even OneManga! *sigh*)