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USSj1SupaJay
2008-11-16 . chapter 9
Poor turles. i feel bad for him...actually i dont lol
godzillahomer
2008-11-16 . chapter 9
great chapter
DBZROCKS10
2008-11-16 . chapter 9
Pure randomness! It's actually Saiyan-From-Hyrule's turn actually. ^^

GWY!
The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule
2008-11-15 . chapter 9
It's umm... DBZROCK10's turn now! Yeah, that's right!

Goten: No it's not Saiyan, it's your turn!

Me: (Slaps hand over Goten's mouth) Quiet you! Lol, jk. ^^ I love watching Sandra beat up on Turles, that'll teach him!

GWY!
DBZROCKS10
2008-10-28 . chapter 8
Lol! Take that Turles.

Turles: Ow. I was just kidding.

Me: (Punches him on the face again)

Turles: (Passes out)

Alright, now it's your turn KidGoku13!
The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule
2008-10-27 . chapter 8
Heh heh heh, I laughed when Sandra slapped Turles unconcious. ^^ So I guess it's your turn now, huh? ...Eep! That means MY turn is coming soon! Must get inspiration working...

Goten: Why don't you put batteries in it?

Me: What??

Goten: Everytime somethin' doesn't work, my mom puts batteries in it!

Me: -_-'

GWY!
DBZROCKS10
2008-10-04 . chapter 7
I know I wrote this chapter, but just reading it makes it seem so new to me! Guess is...who's turn now? I forgot. -_-'
USSj1SupaJay
2008-09-22 . chapter 7
yea...alittle too much goku look-alikes lol
godzillahomer
2008-09-21 . chapter 7
heh, one of these days goku will find out how to combine the son grin and the solar flash
great chapter
The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule
2008-09-21 . chapter 7
Hah! I loved the part where Jerome and Trunks vaulted after Turles and Bardock asked who Goku was! XD

GWY!
DBZROCKS10
2008-07-28 . chapter 6
Ugh...it's my turn? Guess I need to start typin', but not right now. Heh. Lotsa stuff to do.
USSj1SupaJay
2008-07-28 . chapter 6
jerome will be excited to see the others, cant wait. GreatJob!
godzillahomer
2008-07-27 . chapter 6
I wonder who is the principal/headmaster/headmistress of the school

good chapter
The-Saiyan-From-Hyrule
2008-07-27 . chapter 6
*Blushes* It was alright, I guess... *Scratches head* Yep, took me about a week to write that tiny little thing... -_-'

I can't wait to see what happens next! GWY!
DBZROCKS10
2008-06-30 . chapter 5
Heh, heh! Nice chapter by Ussj1SupaJay! Hope more people would read this.
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