Oh boy...think all us JS fans have had thoughts like these!! Lol!

Loved that last line! PLEASE can we have more? This story is crying out for a couple more chapters. PPLLEAASSE!

Love it but i wish their was more

Great idea and awesome developing...

But I want more. Even only one more line... just a reaction from Lizzie and one from Jack.

Still, liked it a lot. Haha, Lizzie is a ninja xD.

Well, cya. Rum for ye,
Kaori Kuni

I really enjoyed this...I was hoping to find antoher chapter..

Simple, but sexy. I loved the way it flowed from her fantasy, to her envy. It was really great. I loved the part at the end where he says, "So it is you."

Great writing!

-Rory4

Now see here, Missy, you came in hot on this wonderful little story--started high and got higher--now that's interesting!! Loved the pacing, loved the comment by Jack at the end, me personally, yeah, I'd say a bit more bite, his feelings were up, he had been on a mission and called it off for the possiblity that she was there. Nice how you lead us to think maybe he does see her as he heads upstairs. And lawd, Missy, Elisabeth definitely failed in polite inside your head conversations, didn't she? She was running heavy fuel with her head talk--getting herself beside herself, I'm thinkin--strong sharp piece, excellent balance--I'd say you achieved what you set out to do. And it's worth a re-read as well, so thanks much for your hard work--you crafted clean and twisty--good choices at every junction. Take all you can, give nothing back!! Pearlseed

really awesome story! do you have any more stories of this shiping couple. if you do please contact me or if you need a beta just ask and you might receive. keep up the great writing up!\
my email is

Very nice. I especially love the "so it is you" part :D

You+smut=My favorite person alive! I read you proflie and would have copied the whole thing, if it weren't flagrant plagarism!

lol he caught her!
great story! :D

Wow, that sure was pretty damn awesome, too bad it was a standard alone, huh! Cause dammit if I didn't want more after reading it, oh man!

The writing was flawless and so was the character portrayal, as well as the Mature theme, good job!

Thanks for sharing! ps. I'd so love to see more of said one-shot...

Why only a oneshot? It's nice!

it was really good especiallyf or your first M. :~)

you could write a sequel, maybe from his point of view

great storie!

Cheers
AJ

lovely just lovly for a first chapter a little short but good...her husband is will turner right? y ? did he leave?

NO!! no oneshot! negative, PLEASE continue! i loove it!