Wow, this is great. You have a way with details- a timeline would be short, but it's taken me a few hours to read these two parts, and I'm a fast reader. Heh, details are everyone's friend. I was a bit confused at the Gerudo part, but then I read on... Then again, I'm a guy. Good job!

Sao: I would be selfish...

HOS: But we're so pathetic, we don't have anything to be selfish WITH!!!!

Sao: Heh heh, j/p. Ne wayz, I don't understand how your Zelda stories have so little reviews?! Maybe it's cuz ppl just plain suck. I know I was suppose to read this like, Saturday, or Sunday, or whenever I said I was gonna read it...

HOS: But we got banned from the computer for awhile. Ne wayz, I doubt you're reading this.

Sao: Oh well, that just means we can be stupider than usual and there's no one to be witness to that!
~Sao & HOS
P.S. Really cute, the whole Hermes this at the end, and I was wondering about her whole period thing, glad you didn't forget. Ta-ta!

*wiping tears from eyes* poor hermes! *sobs* ok...i'm, calm...wahhh!

anyways...zelda got found out, hah! wot a nightmare. again i say, blooming brill...will review other two parts for good measure

*hugs Link Worshipper* I LOVE THIS!!!!!! FAVORITES LIST!!!

WAAAAAH!!!! I LOVE IT!!! This is wonderful: wonderful writing, wonderful story, wonderful characters! I can't read fast enough! :D