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Fan of Fanfics21
2009-12-14 . chapter 3
you better update soon
He Who Rules With an Iron Hoof
2009-12-08 . chapter 1
Xenomorphs use pheromones to see, just like ants. Some ants have no use for their eyes because they never leave the pits of their hives and so they have developed the ability to see using scents.

That's why the robot alien was immediately identified in one of my comics and why it was allowed access when it had the fake pheromones.

Also in AvP2 (the game) they explain it.

Ask me any questions about aliens/predators you want, I used to be obsessed with them as a child and have a 2 foot stack of pred/alien/avp comics. I couldn't wait when I heard about the movie.
Cream-Bunny
2009-12-02 . chapter 3
hehehe, very nice story so far, I like it. It's gory to having people impregnate with eggs -giggle- and in all honestly I love how Naruto is acting with all the shit he had to put up to. Favorite part so far was when he fucking snapped at his team, priceless :P

A thing I'm confused about is how he choices people to impregnate with both his eggs and face-hugger.
fanofmany
2009-11-30 . chapter 3
Liked the story very much, I liked how he all stealthy and not all godly but just as good. ( not really fun if naruto suddenly is really strong but slowly rises). hmm longer?
And I don't really think pairing is neccesary since he pretty much kills them anyway.(unless they do that cacoon thing)
CedarKuruQan
2009-11-26 . chapter 3
Like the way he works, hate the way he treats females. Or sakura and the captive's woman was probably deserving. But Hana didnt really do anything to him, why kill her off? She might be a side char, but even she has her uses. Having an average side char offed for the sake of nameless children won't do you good in the long run unless you have a solid plan at least four to five chapters ahead, eight chapters ideally. Because you'll be running out of chars and have to introduce new ones.

Still, great writing.
SethFC
2009-10-09 . chapter 3
I liked the chapter unfortunately i have little to contribute other then that i like the fighting scenes and that in general i love your work.
Alehhandro
2009-10-07 . chapter 3
well at first. i really like the story...
something sich strange is really good to read...
this chap and the others i really like and especially the strange feelings of naruto are refreshing to read.. many authors simply invent a drastik change and then start to describe the "totalyavesomeueberpowers" of the new naru...
what i dont like is the extremely drastic change of personality... maybe you could soften it down a bit... maybe??
a suitable improvement? i dont really have that in mind right now.. i think i'll wait vor another chap ore two,... to post my suggestions...

keep it up that way Reid and i'll be waiting
Abandoned Fox
2009-09-18 . chapter 3
I like the chapter! NO! I LIKE THE STORY! Please continue! :D
Skelo
2009-09-17 . chapter 3
Nice to see you had the pairing planned out. upd8 soon!! (hinata? love to impregnate her lol!)
AtomicPancakes
2009-09-14 . chapter 3
My friend, this is the most, horrifically, awsome naruto\AVP crossovers that i have gazed apon. It is articulate, violently Dark, and a smooth blend to colide the two. I believe that you captured the Xeno mindset in a beautiful way. Dark, Survival orentated, and plenty of abilities to boot. My only recommendation is that ,when you reveal the pairing, try not to do it in a way that defies logic.

I.E. "oh Naruto" Hinata\Sakura\Tenten\Temari\Anko\Akamaru said as they caressed his alien form. "i love you, even though your appearence could make Freddy Kruger pee himself, please, make me a woman, even though you becoming an alien probably made you lose your penis,gangbang me!"

A little extream, but i have seen good stories lose credability because of things like that. Beautifully done, please update, i am yearing to see what happens next.
ice of darkness
2009-09-10 . chapter 3
I think you should have hana turn into one of his mistress as well as tsume because thing three way beast/huminoid
Sakouya
2009-09-08 . chapter 3
Whats the point of naruto checking if he still has his dick if he isn't going to use it?
Orange-Fuzz-Ball
2009-09-04 . chapter 2
i like the part naruto throw the truth to the team 7.also a little bit feel creep when kyuubi said naruto can give a embryo.

9day
Orange-Fuzz-Ball
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
love the idea naruto become alien.i already read naruto become hunter but it is the frist naruto is ailen.keep up author.:))

will the queen take the woman form?if yes then which form u let the queen take?

9day
Robby16
2009-08-16 . chapter 3
now i am not planing on telling you who to pair naruto with but i am wonder who it will be. also whoever it is, ex. Hinata, are you planning on turning her/them(if harem) into hybrid's like Naruto?
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