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Alana84 2008-05-12 ch 2,	abuseAnother great chapter, I really liked it! So where're they going, he's taking her to Fagin's', huh?! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr... 2008-05-08 ch 2,	abuseO! Another intriguing chapter! Great job! I felt all nervous and tense as Dodger was trying to get her to enter the pub! I wanted to yell, "Follow him and do whatever he asks! He knows what he's doing!" Lol. In a closet together, eh? Hehehe... what comes next? Looking forward to the next chapter! Short ones are OK anyway, as long as your better about updating than I am! Good luck!
Red-Cherry-Flowers 2008-05-05 ch 2,	abuseWow, this is turning into a pretty gripping story. Nice update =)
Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr... 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseO! I'm intrigued! Another Dodger romance,eh? We'll see won't we? Well, I really enjoyed the little intro! Violet sounds like a real pro! Dodger seems to have noticed,too! Good for the both of them! Please write more soon! I would really like to find out what happens next! You're doing a great job so far!
Red-Cherry-Flowers 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abuseo, this sound entertaining! Please continue!
Alana84 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abuseInteresting start, I really like the name Violet, it seems to fit her (the girl) very well! This chapter was good but a little short though, oh well! It was also well written, which is very good! So the boy (I take) was Dodger/Jack, huh! I think this has potential, so please do continue and update soon...