I loved loved LOVED how you told this from the Dark Ace's point of view. More people need to see things from the cyclonians side.

kay i know this is like three years after the last chappie of this fic...but WOW! THAT'S NOT BIG ENOUGH TO SHOW MY WOWOCITY! is that even a word...oh well it works! I just sat there reading it from start to finish...

it was awesome, epic, cute, brooding, just EPIC WOW AMAZING!

LIKE NO WORDS TO DESRIBE THIS! OH AND U ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS ON FANFICTION LIKE EVER! There were so many emotions to it funny at dark ace's responses, sad, tears, anger, understanding! I love how u portrayed the whole is there such a thing as evil and good! omg i want to read like all your stories, i've only read like 2!

FWI im a total Dark Ace fangirl so i'll read any fanfics about him in the blink of an eye! i really cant describe my feeling for this fic! wowocity scale is broken! YOU. ARE. AWESOME. EPIC! KEEP WRITING!

ARGH I WANT TO KEEP COMPLIMENTING BUT THERE ARE NO WORDS!

WELL CIAO

starknight

ps my best friends think im crazy for liking Storm Hawks (the best show ever) but whenever i stumble across a good fic i always show them and they're like WOW!

CIAO

starknight

omg i LOVED this story so much! it really captures Dark Ace, the way he would think and all XD i hope he didnt die lol :( and i love the way u portray the other characters, they seem so real and u havent changed their personalities. Finn was hell serious XD loved it. and there was an in-depth view of how Piper felt wich i think was really good.

in the end the bad guys always win XD hehe

You. Are. Brilliant.

Absolutely brilliant. My felicitations for what is possibly the best series of drabbles on . You've captured the characters marvellously and I am so glad I didn't read this before it was completed because it would be hanging in my thoughts every waking moment until the next update.

Furthermore, I love the Dark Ace and I think you've portrayed him even better than the real cartoon series has done - showing that the world isn't just 'bad' and 'good' and that one man's traitor is another man's hero. Your fic seems far more realistic and thought-provoking (not to cast a slur on the cartoons, it makes for great Saturday morning entertainment and I enjoy it to bits).

Completely awesome! You just made my day :-) Long live Cyclonia!

That last line chilled me to the bone.

I read it and went, "Oh shi-!"

Amazing. I applaud you.

This Is Such A Good Story...Poor Dark Ace for dieing here and in the show...He will always be in our hearts...Even if he is not real, it still feels like he was real.

And I should add that I admire this sort of application of the Stockholm syndrome. Perhaps you should try something similar with MC?

Begging? No need, I was aching to review this. The finale could have been better, giving the tremendous buildup of the first chapters, but that is not to say it is bad. This is quite possibly one of the best works I've read. Good work, Ambrel.

I absolutly loved it! Well done and I hope you write many more great stories! And Good luck with your novel!

x

OKAY! WOW!

HONESTLY!

I JUST RECENTLY STARTED READING THIS, AND IT'S ALREADY OVER!

-"" You were close to hitting the 100 chapter mark anyways, so i can't blame anyone but myself for that. Eh heh -""

Oh geez, i dunno if you're gonna kill me for asking this but...

PLEASE WRITE A PIPER/DARK ACE FIC! It would be SO good!

HONESTLY? Oh wow... this drabble series was awsome!

*still staring at computer screen in pure and utter shock*

PLEASE WRITE A PIPER/DARK ACE FIC! Don't make me dare you! -"" i can't be threatening...for the life of me...i just can't be threatening...

So...i humbly ask...Can you please write a Piper/Dark Ace fic?

Very nice :D I'm glad we got to see Dark Ace from this perspective! Great job! :)

Wow! Didn't see that coming. Dark Ace actually wanted himself to be caught? What a..a.. I don't even have words for what he is. But I guess I can say that he was brave: he knew death was coming to him, and he accepted it without qualms.

I don't know if you should do a full bodied version. I think the things you left unsaid are what appeal to us readers, and make us want to come back to read this over and over.

Great job! I know it must have been difficult restricting yourself to 100 words. But you did it amazingly.

Please write more, and soon!

Congrats & thanks for a beautiful drabble series!

I felt it coming as the words "volunteer" came along..

I felt it coming but the story was too short for me to have enough time to formulate it completely. Short, in a good way. Short, in a way that left me literally gasping as I read the last line.

I said it out loud. And now I find I have to say it again in this review.

And all I can say

is "F.U.C.K."

That being said, don't do a fullbodied one of this. That's milking a dead cow honey _ . Put your energy towards finishing Stranded, or writing a new story, or reading/reviewing my new story (EEK RED ALERT RED ALERT STORYWHORING ALERT ABORT ABORT ABORT ABORT).

God, this was brilliant.

TTNR

Xekstrin, Testament To Obsession

Wow. Just wow.

I could totally see the Dark Ace relishing in a death like that. It's true, they did make him into a martyr.

Incredible. :D

Wow. I really liked it. This story ... it was gripping, escpecially because so little of the actual events were told.

Don't get me wrong; I'd be the happiest little person in the world if you did indeed write an "uncut version."

I LOVED THIS!