Thank-you for writing a good OC story.
Jeb is creepy and we never really know if he's good or bad.
I really like this.
Angel seems really old, but it probably is in the future.
Amazing job, amazing description.
I love the jealousy part.
(I don't understand why you get so few reviews)

well i thought it was intersting, please update it, i would like to see where this goes.