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| WinchesterPhantom 2008-08-18 ch 7,  | abuseHey star jelly! They called her 'Carry'...wtf? And then they insult Mike - they can burn thats all I can say! No one insults Mike or hits on Mike besides Caro or a very drunk Wheeler... :D Good job so far, OOCness yes, but I have a smile on my face so whateva... ~ Winy! |
| shippergrl25 2008-08-13 ch 2, | abuseOkay. Um..so not the best fic i've ever read. i think its very OOC, but I guess that's why its called fiction. I don't like any of the characters, and its a super childish fic. Sorry if that hurts your feelings. |
| LOCISVU 2008-08-09 ch 7, | abuseThat wasn't a pleasant scene for Carolyn. |
| Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever 2008-08-09 ch 7, | abuseI really like it! Please put Carolyn's family history in the next chapter. Please update soon!! |
| superfelix 2008-08-09 ch 7, | abuseWhat a family. Yes please tell me more about Carolyns so nice stepp-mother, great father and horny sister. Poor Carolyn at all on her second first day at MCS. Danny was nice. Mike met Carolyn today the first time...hahaha. I hope he is not worry about Carolyn and do not think, 'why is she here, no good idea.' One thing if you change the chapter. You alway write EMSE not Eames. |
| LeaveIt 2008-08-09 ch 7, | abuseDefinitely want to you to explain about Barek's family. How dare her sister call her a ** and then behave like that! I'd have let Mike land a few punches! Awaiting the next chapter with great impatience. ;o) |
| Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abuseUH OH! I smell trouble!! |
| The Mominator 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abuseInteresting melodrama here. Update soon |
| LOCISVU 2008-06-28 ch 6, | abuseAnd now it begins.I just hope that Carolyn's family warms up to Mike. |
| superfelix 2008-06-28 ch 6, | abuseCarolyn is back in MCS...juhu...jippy. "I AM NOT OVER REACTING!"...yes she is back again. Cool that you make Ross nicer as in chapter 3, or 4. Great that you explain his bad mood in this last chapter. How is Carolyns partner, better as her last? I hope so much, but James Sheppard seams kind. No one knows that Mike and Carolyn are married, this could bedifficult, but her family? What a nice surprise! HAHA. |
| Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever 2008-06-26 ch 5, | abusePlease update soon!! |
| LOCISVU 2008-06-25 ch 5, | abuseCan't wait to meet them. |
| superfelix 2008-06-24 ch 5, | abuseBobby is a really bad driver, but the last 7 years he has no chance to drive. "And I am?" "A goddess!" So right, I don't have to say anything more. Did I really understand it: Carolyn and Mike had sex in this club and everyvody can look at it? I am not certain, if I translate it right. --> what a club is this? I like it. |
| LOCISVU 2008-06-02 ch 4, | abuseWow.I never thought that Capt.Ross would be like that. |
| Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever 2008-06-02 ch 4, | abusePlease update soon! I love it! |