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| Susicar 2008-04-29 ch 1,  | abuse¡¡Dios Mío! Esto es realmente impresionante ("Inesperado", buena elección del título) Tu escribes maravillosamente (¡¡aunque cuánto me haces sufrir, amiga mía!!) Sinceramente espero que puedas transformar tus ideas en un libro; yo amo a mis jovenes autores de fics, aficionados y generosos, por eso me alegra mucho saber que alguno de ellos "da el salto" hacia la publicación profesional (ya varios lo han hecho, y con éxito) ¡¡Mucha sierte, y gracias por compartir tu talento con nosotros. |
| smallrose 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI hope things are going better for you. |
| KaizokuShojo 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, poor, poor Watson! That's so very sad! You did a very good job of conveying the feelings. Excellent work. |
| Pompey 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. God. Poor Watson! And poor Mary -- what on earth happened to her for things to end this way?! and how is Mycroft connected to this horrible matter? (. . . Moran?) I fear you shall have to post more, and rather soon. (and I'm so sorry you were having a day from Hades.) |
| Deana 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was amazing! Will there be more? |
| rabidsamfan 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuse*shakes head* That's quite a teaser, but I have to say that I'm sorry you had to deal with anything similar. I hope you'll be all right eventually. |
| quibblequeen 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseYour depiction of Watson's emotions is very realistic.Your presentation is very neat this time, except for a few instances here and there. Well done!Keep writing-you have lots of potential. |
| Protector of the Gray Fortr... 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseVery descriptive, certainly beyond what Doyle normally did, but heartrendingly real. The only thing that bugged me was Watson's reaction, he seemed rather calm throughout the entire gristly discovery. Good job, -PGF |
| KCS 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseVery touching, and I'd be interested in the novel, certainly. I'm slightly confused on a point, as earlier in the chapter you have the scene set on Baker Street and then at the end of the chapter you say Watson heads for Baker Street. |