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| nannon 2008-05-28 ch 2, anon. | abusethis was very cool. i love your characterizations of everyone. i never really thought about a redeemed maul being like this, but now i can't really see it being any other way. oh, and this line, "...hastened forward to enter the hut and rescue the person from their exile, or perhaps just barge in and attempt to be impressive." = love. |
| Anakin T Skywalker 2008-04-28 ch 2,  | abuseAh, very nice! |
| Harm Marie 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseThis was a good chapter. |
| Ann Jinn 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseA really great story. A good understanding of what a prison can be for one and light for another. Still it had to be hard to see him and think of Qui Gon's death and deal with that. |
| Harm Marie 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved the end of the chapter, where you transitioned to italics. |