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| M M Forever 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseNot a bad story, and rather well-written. My only real complaint is that it doesn't seem to fit the personalities of the original characters... namely Sora. I could see maybe Mimi doing that (just make it Matt instead of Tai please), but Sora doesn't seem to be the one to do something like that. Other than that, not bad at all. |