what the hell is going on xD

i'm second-guessing EVERYTHING. is linda apart of the game or isnt she? now i dont think she is, considering her last statement to mello. i also think that it was matt who made the shinigami eye deal. but i cant be sure.

i like the fact that youve recruited naomi for this story. i also rather enjoyed the fact that she sat ryuzaki-style in order to increase her thinking abilities. and she's totally working for L! could this get any cooler? well, youve made it flippin awesome so far, so id say YES.

oh, i do hope you update soon! im totally hooked!

wait... so maybe it isnt B? *blinks*

yes, i quite agree, the bandages do make him cooler. xD and this could also be used to his advantage, should mello ever try to kill him: his face is completely obscured! SUCKS FOR YOU, MELLO.

and L makes his debut!

Finally another chapter!I'm sorry though,I'm not gonna guess cus I'm totally clueless:)!I think I said in another review that I'm not good with this stuff XDD..But I still enjoy it!And I love that you include characters as Naomi(the only cool woman DN's ever had) and BB(Such a little freak.I want to hug him:))
Anyway,please update soon;)!

Interesting. I have a newish theory. All four of them are getting notes from 1st Kira. Two of them get notes because they are 2nd and 3rd Kira, and the other two get notes to inform them about the other two Kiras in the group. Makes sense to me. Having all four of them fight against each with L in the mix would probably amuse 1st Kira. And I now believe that 1st Kira is Watari. As for who 3rd Kira is, I still say it's either Linda or Matt, since I don't think that Near would do the Eye Deal if he were 3rd Kira.

And I do find it interesting that 3rd Kira wants the Eyes. Didn't see that coming. Though, my suspicions for 3rd Kira have risen for Linda, as for her behaviour so far. She's already run into Matt and Mello. Has she run into Near yet? I can't remember. And it's interesting that she suspects Mello as 2nd Kira, too. Great chapter. This seems even better than I Have The Right To Destroy. Update again real soon!

Aw,B!He is just too funny:)!I hope you'll include him more.
I don't think it's too easy,I have still no idea who to suspect...I would say Near for now...or not XD.
Anyway, it was another great chapter.Please update soon!

Nice part about Kira in the end...though it didn't made me any smarter XD, except I guess it means he isn't one of the top four,huh?And he isn't an OC?Great,I hate OC:s(and it would make a bad mystery because noone would be able to guess who he is...)
But I guess the real mystery is who of the other three has been given pages of the Death note...I have no clue!
But I would love if it were Linda!:) Cool chapter!

It's not too easy to me!But it's good though...Always makes you want to read more!
Poor Roger died...XD
Okay,I admit I'm afraid of guessing because I'm afraid of sounding stupid, but I'm gonna try anyway.Is Kira one of the top four?Because he seems to know what's going on at Wammy's and it shouldn't be easy to place cameras or stuff there.I don't think it is L:D...maybe Watari?XDD

Yay!Another exciting story(but I haven't seen it until now...sorry :)).This was really a promising chapter,now I'm off to read the other ones.We XDD!

I knew it, Kira was Beyond Birthday! Or, at least that Beyond Birthday would be invovled. Wasn't it said that A committed sucicde, though? Very interesting chapter. I have two current theories so far. Either all four of them are Kiras, or Matt or Linda is Kira 2. So far, Matt looks the most suspicious for Kira 2. I just hope Mello or Kira 2 win this time. Either one of them would be fine with me, as long as one of the Kiras win. Great chapter. Update again soon.

Interesting chapter. I still say Kira's either L or Watari. Who else could it be that knows the Wammy children?

Another great and interesting chapter. My suspicion for Kira is Watari and L. My suspicion for the other Note user is...well, too many suspects right now. I mean, we have Roger looking like he's putting notes in BOTH of Near's and Linda's rooms, and Matt was acting a wee bit suspicious. Perhaps...all four of them are using Notes? Anyways, great chapter.

OMG! This is like Kira Kira by lovestinks. I wonder who is it. Should we be trying to guess before Mello?

Okay, this story's officially creepy. And I love it! Keep it up!

Yay! Another smart fic that can train people's brains and make them lose more calories! Hurrah for you! :D

I thought it was a one-shot, though, because it said "Complete" instead of "In-Progress".