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| oreoxlove4ever 2008-07-04 ch 2,  | abusegreat chapter update soon =) how old is kagome? |
| Mysterious Panther 2008-06-30 ch 2, | abusePoor poor Kagome gonna be deaf if them girls keep screeching. 'Look at me I'am a target!' just made me laugh till I almost past out but luckily I have carpet! 100 0 0 0/5 >:D Update soon! |
| Emo-girl in LOVE 2008-06-22 ch 2, | abusei love this so much |
| Haru Inuzuka 2008-06-22 ch 2, | abuse-Amused chuckling- Hm, pretty good, plz continue soon! =^^= |
| Swordie Von Demon 2008-06-16 ch 2, | abuseme likey!interesting inded! |
| Airily 2008-06-10 ch 2, | abuse'Ino and Sakura just looked traumatized.' Laughs. That was priceless. Lovely, even if unfortunate, contrast against Naruto's guarded composure. |
| Kagome Yuki Niwa 2008-06-09 ch 2, | abuseIt's a very interesting and original plot line! i really am enjoying the fic! Please update when you can! |
| 43InuAsha 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter. |
| Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami 2008-06-01 ch 2, | abuseThis is nice. Will she talk to any of the student outside of the classroom? How about to the teachers? Kagome is funny to me! I love how she is keeping the kids in line. I wonder how Shikamaru is feeling? "Troublesome." Please update again soon! |
| x0SilverFeathersx0 2008-06-01 ch 2, | abuseOh my, this seems to be a promising story(; and I'm betting the pairing is Iruka/Kagome, ne? Not a huge fan of that pair, but this story's good enough for me to enjoy it even with that pairing! Aha. I like how you characterized Kagome and the rest of the characters--the adult Kagome I can actually see acting the way you portray her, and the others are good as well. You've totally won me over with that! And I like how Kagome's skills are a bit unbalanced, and not overdone like "the usual" or too weak. Nice! |
| B.D. Gerretson 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseupdate soon! |
| cowgirlkitten2000 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abusevery good on this chapter. and yes all children can b ankle biters i know i have 2 just like that. |
| Valinor's Twilight 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abusegreat update |
| Ayjah 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseI do love the image of them as tiny chubby cheeked kids... cute :) |
| yumeniai 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseSo cute! Please update soon! |