You know, I thought this would be crap, I mean, about 90% of the fics published here are crap.

But your fic here, it's good, it's well thought of and it's well written, for that, I give you my thanks; congratulations, you wrote a very nice piece of fictione.

Alas, there's one small little detail. Songfics are not allowed in here, read the guidelines, full lyrics from copyrighted songs not on the public domain are not allowed, I do suggest you remove the lyrics from your fic, they're there as an afterthough and really don't add anything to the overall story.

Yay! I loved this, I only wished they really DID go on a journey to become younger. Some words in the chapter are jumbled up and some tenses are used wrongly, other than that it is much enjoyed!

We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy

I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand

Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you


Good fic. I enjoyed it.

I'm intrigued. Will there be any sequels like the aftermath of the wish? I want to read more.

Damn! Your the reason i dont like one-shots. IT WAS SO AMAZING-GREAT DICTION AND DETAIL, EVERYBODY WAS IN CHARACTER, WRITING STYLE-FANASTIC,Great One-shot! I hate reading one-shots because I know its already the end of the story..and this one was good and I want more...anyway... Good job. I look forward to reading other stories from you
- The Critic18 (4.9 out of 5)