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purrple
2009-10-06 . chapter 4
I liked it! Please update!
Tye Kousetsu
2009-10-04 . chapter 4
CONTINUE PLEASE!
Kota Shinobi
2009-08-20 . chapter 4
you are going to complete this right?
xxasianicexx
2009-01-12 . chapter 4
wa kowaii eiji! cant wait for the next chapter
Hiroen Nnir
2008-07-09 . chapter 4
oh wow!
I'm so glad I found this story!
I absolutly love it!
it raises so many questions that I just can't help but smile!
I really hope you up-date soon!
I would really like to know what happens!
kay54
2008-06-17 . chapter 4
Did you stop updating this story because you have not updated in a while. Please continue!
thesoulofthegreatbell
2008-06-05 . chapter 4
I love it! I love it! I love it!
I like it! Really! so Cool!
Please Update! Please Update!
I wanna Know whats Next!
I like your Writings.. I dun have Problems at your Grammars!
Neatly Made! Cool Story!

LOL yeah you should have made it as AtobeXEiji... haha! Joking! EijiXRyoma is Good... but Dream Pair is best! hehe...

FAV
Eureka
2008-05-03 . chapter 4
nakahito-chan!! lol finally i got the chance to see your fic. love your friendster profile though (^_~) anyway, waah? this is confusing!! dont tell me my sengoku will have a clone too! oh no!
enwei, u keep on updating. i'll surely keep an eye on this!

+_Eureka_+
Hoku ala
2008-05-02 . chapter 4
Oh! I'm looking forward to reading more!
speadee
2008-05-01 . chapter 4
This is getting really weird. It sounds like Kikumaru wasn't the only one who had a clone or whatever. The others seemed to have, too. Did Kikumaru's clone appear at Seigaku one or 3 days after he left for the assembly? At first, it said that he was back the very next day (2nd day of the Ranking Tournament), bit they have been saying he returned 3 days later.

What do you mean by "thirty meeting before the end of classes"? If it was before the end of classes, shouldn't they also be in class instead of the clubroom?

The scenes with the real Kikumaru and Echizen were cute. It is typical of them to hang out at places such as the burger shop and arcade. I wonder if Echizen would tell the others about it. Same with Momoshiro and Kaidou about what happened with Fuji Yuuta and Kamio. These are all important information. I like how you brought in the other schools.

It's good that Echizen seems to care more about people. Then again, that could happen if he is interested in someone.
tezuka
2008-05-01 . chapter 4
Hmm. Strange situation ne @@ update soon please?
speadee
2008-04-29 . chapter 3
Good progress! This is getting interesting though scary at the same time. You just need to work on spelling and grammar.

At first I thought Kikumaru and someone else switched bodies (or minds), and returned to Seigaku. Then it was clear that Kikumaru was both at Seigaku and the assembly. Did someone send a robot of him or did that e-mail made a physical clone of him? If it's a clone, it might have something to do with his using clones in the Nationals.

Good job showing how the whole team knows one another well! You also portrayed Kikumaru's character well through his teammates' words and actions.
hysterical laughter
2008-04-29 . chapter 3
OMG i love it! i really want to see what happens next! two Eijis! i really want to see if the two eijis ever meet... and i wonder who sent the email... arg! so spook as well as thrilling! i really hope you update soon! Hugs and Kisses! really interesting! i wonder how it pans out... gambatte ne!
tezuka
2008-04-29 . chapter 3
You can't stop here >< I wanna read on!! (great, now I'm behaving like a brat!) Interesting story! Please update soon, nya? I miss Eiji >
tezuka
2008-04-29 . chapter 2
WOW! This is mysterious! And you update fast :P
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