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arizony
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
Amira, don't worry about reviewers who don't really understand the story, nor it's point. You have given a very good idea of the kiss. You have also addressed the issues that underlie Katara's reluctance to move forward with her obvious feelings for Aang. Good job, as usual.
LunarianPrincess
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
cute
Amira Elizabeth
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
It was no such thing. I didn't write it as a response to some "crazed" Zutara notions. I wrote it as a response to my own feelings on the trailer.

I really didn't appreciate the comment and I think it was unjustified and insulting. I write because I write what comes to me and my own interpretations. Not to "get back" at Zutarian notions.
Zenjamin
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
Amira... I didnt know you wrote fan fics.
That drable series made me laugh with joy, and even say "YES!" once.
wish I would have found your work sooner.



However, This fic was really not that good IMO... It seemed like it was just a excuse/defense from the crazed Zutara fandom without it being sincere...



PS:
It is still better then any Zutaran fic I have evenr read, dont get me wrong. Im just comparing it to your more "spontanious" or heartfelt works.
Elyon's Servant
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
AWW! sO SWWEET! :D great job!
james612
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
i liked that, ireally hope it happens that way
Liselle129
2008-05-03 . chapter 1
Yay, you're back! This was an interesting take on that kiss, although it seemed to wander in the middle more than your stories usually do. I liked how you emphasized that his being short and bald didn't bother her.

Have you read my version, "Kiss Me Once, Kiss Me Twice"? I'd like it if you would. In a way, there's another theory in "The Path Ahead" (chapter 3). I wrote that a long time ago, before the trailer, but it still seems to fit.
blackkatspinellikins
2008-05-02 . chapter 1
cuteness squared!
Loupami
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
I loved the way you played around with Aang's uncertainty here. Katara's look in the trailer made me think she had some sort of an epiphany. Hope to see more from you soon!
singwiththewind
2008-04-29 . chapter 1
"Being the Avatar he had wanted peace. Being Aang, he had just wanted her love."

Those are quite possibly the two best sentences in all the Kataang stories I've ever read.
cartoonartist
2008-04-29 . chapter 1
Great story. Good idea.

I hope the episode where the kiss takes place is exactly like this.
Plot Bunnies Rule
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
YES! This is what really happened, I'm sure of it! Or, something like it at least. LOVE IT!
donjonkeeper
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
2 word: THANK YOU! I was so ** off with trailer because of the kiss and the "hug", but you gave me hope again.
Departed
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
Aww, this is so cute. Loved it ^^ Although I think the Katara's denial has something to do with the Avatar State, I'd definately prefer this to happen :) Nice job.
prettygirl17
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
Lol. Well very good! It was very well written and I loved it! Great wonderful work!
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