This is interesting, I'd love to read more even though it's been years since the publish date. I just recently found this show and love it. I really like Rachel Nichols and found her in the new Continuum show, so I looked up her other work. I like that this story has no dialog yet each character sounds just the way the should. You must really read people/characters well. Thanks for the read.

cool. simple, but cool. you portray mel and danny really well, and rebecca too for that matter. i particularly like the line about danny wanting rebecca to paint her kitchen bright red.

Love your story. Its very good. Love the idea of Danny/Rebecca. Loved this show and hated to see it cancelled just as it was getting good.