Interesting concept. Continue! Update soon. I'm interested in finding out Orochimaru's true agenda.

i love this story can't wait for next chapter

awesme, keep it up

Hm...I like it. Keep it up! Oh, and the pairing of NarutoxTayuya is really good, I'd go with that. .

it would have been awesome if Narutos curse seal makes it easier to use and control Kyuubis chakra without it having such a detrimental affect on his health after he goes 4 tails. but then i figure this story would be like your other story the kitsune seal. anyways i like the Tayuya option so i hope you roll with it, either her or Karin. now that i think about it i think Karin would be better since shes looks way hotter and those glasses she wears, i just think naughty librarian or somethin like that, not to mention her unique skills are freakin awesome, the ability to sense chakra from miles away, that fuckin crazy. anyways until next time

-The Don

not bad... but i would like to know: will Naruto be Curse Marked? with one similar to the Kayuga? for complete loyalty?

hail to Tom Riddle's Brother. :3

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!Naruto/Tayuya or Naruto/Isarabi!Tayuyas first though!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!Naruto/Tayuya or Naruto/Isarabi!Tayuyas first though!

no! i was so into rading it! its soo kol! haha

wow!

Interesting. Extremely descriptive, which is totally awesome, and a believable storyline to boot! you just may have cooked up the perfect story my friend!

Very interesting story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

P.S. It's actually spelled 'Kimimaro'.

good

HAKU

great chappie