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| German Mickey 2008-06-16 ch 8,  | abuseWahh! That *sniff* was *cry* BEAUTIFUL!! I loved tthis story! Best wishes for future stories! |
| LoveFlame 2008-06-16 ch 8, | abuseMe: AW! They got married! Yay A/P romantic goodness! Scarlett: I know! I loved the proposal. And I enjoyed the wedding part. I love weddings! Me: Me too! Scarlett & Me: Great job! |
| SakariWolfe 2008-06-16 ch 8, | abuseAw! ^_^ I love happy endings!! ~SW ^.=.^ |
| Lady Snowstorm 2008-06-16 ch 8, | abuseOMG that was beautiful. |
| Life'sAbitchAndThenYouDie 2008-06-11 ch 7, | abuseHI! Great plot, but it all goes so fast... maybe you could slow it down a bit? Loved the last scene when Aerrow came back, but I wish you could write more detailes... HUggles! |
| Finny-Kun Goddess 2008-06-07 ch 7, | abuseIts good. keep up the good work & please Update Asap 1)It’s 3 year later the Storm hawks have finished the war ( Atmos wining) and Aerrow Pops the question at the wedding. ( Harrier and Starling agreed to get married after the war so then they can raise their kids in a safe world.) 2)Saphire called Finn a Chicken because he won’t admit he likes Aria… A LOT! 3)Stork meets a nice female merb who is a friend of the bride. I vote 4 those 3 |
| manic-munchkin15 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseOMG!! I just about had a heart attack when Aerrow came back, I was so happy! More! (and I'm totally voting as soon as I have the time) X3 |
| Allie-Chan the Clepto 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseAmazing as always. Hehe yay for more. For a second there i thought it was all said and done. But yay more story. |
| Black-Wolf-Warrior 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseWell of course the first one! Who wouldn't want that one! Oh yeah, crazy people...oh uh...anyway...update soon! |
| Unleash The Shadow 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseThe first one! XD And Aeroow is alive! Yay! One thing I noticed was that you hurried it a little... Next time try to slow it down a bit maybe? Really good though! |
| Startail 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseYour stories are so awsome and i cant wait till you update your other ones. So here is my vote. It’s 3 year later the Storm hawks have finished the war ( Atmos wining) and Aerrow Pops the question at the wedding. ( Harrier and Starling agreed to get married after the war so then they can raise their kids in a safe world.) |
| SakariWolfe 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseHmm...I vote for the Saphire-calling-Finn-a-chicken one XD YAY!! Aerrow's back!! =D I can't wait to read the next chapter! =3 ~SW ^.=.^ |
| Lady Snowstorm 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abusegreat like always anyways i vote for Aerrow popping the question and the girls execpt Aria to gang up on Finn.Thanks can't wait for the next chapter. Lady Snowstorm |
| German Mickey 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseYay! Aerrow is back! I'm so happy! It's about time. I was getting worried. Thank you! |
| Viva La Brookie 2008-05-08 ch 6, | abusewow. I cant wait to see what happens next. I really want aerrow to come back; and he is so its all good! lol :] -Dinobrooke -By the way great story!- |