I am amazed by the details of your story... you've used almost 20 words to portray the phone call between 2 old friends. Even though there is still no verbal conversation between the 2 individuals, I have already felt the adnormality and tension of their friendship/relationship. I definitely have no problem in picturing the scenes. You are great in building the drama and tension... I hope you can write more! Please update soon.

Mysterious and perplexing. What was the phone call about? Who is Elizabeth, and how does this all relate to CSI?