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Reviews For: Slow Dancing in a Burning Room

CKAeryn
2008-09-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseDon't wanna log in now, but it's really me ;)
Very good story, I definitely like the change in events, with Gibbs being her company at the ball, and of course the end.
Poor driver, but at least he knows that he will wait the whole night *g*
SuperBex
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abuseO.M.G. *bows down to your superior awesomeness!!* XD
I totally loved it!
I think you really captured their relationship and, in particular, Jenny's character.
I loved the last line and I thought this sentence was great: "She knows what he is thinking of, and leaves him alone with his memories for now as she loses herself in her's." Quite poetic actually. =)
Keep up the amazing work! =D
Xx
(PS. Loved the 'acquired taste' mention- *BA squee!*)
ImSoMMAD
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was BRILLIANT! I really really enjoyed that, so very Jibbs and gorgeous at the same time. I smirked at the Undercovers ref. at the end, and couldn't help grin at their easiness. Write again soon!

xxStellaxx
robbie-kikka
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abusei would happily read more of this!
thanks!!
VerityFrancesB
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseYou know, there is nothing quite like Jibbs, basement and bourbon on a Monday morning to lift the spirits!

Thank you hun

V!
xox
Kelly
2008-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey this is a great start for a possible relationship between Gibbs and Jenny. It definetely left me wanting more at the end! Keep it up, more chapters would be welcome!
sn855850
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseGreat beginning!! I sure hope you turn this into a full blown story!
csiAngel
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseAww very sweet. He totally should have gone with her!
Lauren
2008-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is awesome! I love the tension between them and I really hope you continue this as the series you were talking about! Great job!
Keia21Sprenglewski
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseVery good and oh course I would love to read more.
aserene
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseI love it! Well done on the jibbs! Excellent work!
I was wondering though...when is your Dream story going to come back online? I was wondering if Chris gets to kill them or not.
jessycardy
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseThat was a nice piece of work! Keep up the Jibbs writing!
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