Love your story! Fantastic! Incredibly written. I can't wait for an update!!

I read for a few hours and got quite sucked in to your fic. Im sad to have run out of chapters to read.

if I had an account Id put you and your story into my favorites.

Fascinating. This is the first of this fandom that I've read, and I must say, I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep it up and update soon.

:( No update?

Love this story. So very very much!

-Spark

hahaha...Elena's character is amazing and funny. Expecially, when she tried to concluded that Cloud is gay...;-)


I'm still so curious about what Cloud speaked to Genesis...Will it be written in next next chapter??

I very much enjoyed reading this. My heart goes pitter patter with the Sephiroth/Cloud moments. I especially enjoyed the scene where Cloud discovers the drawing Sephiroth drew as a child, in all its crude glory.

Well polished, and well written story. I look forward to future installments; please continue on with this fic!

Wow. This is awesome. I love how Cloud's got to balance everything - and Zack being freaked out by it is great. Sephiroth's doubts and wanting to believe are just perfect - and it's going to drive me crazy wondering what Cloud said to Genesis. Hopefully they can manage to pull everything out of the gutter and save the people important to each of them.

What the...? I thought I'd sent in a review when I reached this point? It was probably late and my eyes couldn't take any more. But I love this story, and am greedy for more. So when you have a parcel of words ready to go, I'm on the list and will be happy to receive. Ah, I see now. Your Mom died and you warned it would be a while. Sorry for the flip attitude in the beginning of this... I am sorry. Been there, and it's not easy, no matter the circumstances. When you're ready, I will be too. sincerely, mc

Just... wow. I really am struck speechless. I don't think there's much praise I can lavish you with that hasn't been said already, but I'll let you know that you now have another fan waiting eagerly for updates.
Also, I'm really sorry about your mother.

Pretty interesting story so far. The writing style and voice is pretty different, but not sure what to say about them. I think the scenes move pretty quick, but they flow very well so none of it is too jarring ever.

I really am liking the plot though. I'm still curious what the Planet's reasoning is. Does it want Sephiroth to die? Or is it trying to just alter his path? I'm sure the later chapters cover this. Just reading when I can, hopefully I'll get through this all within the next week or so.

I don't know why i havn't noticed the new chapter...frankly I'm bewildered by the fact. But I'm so happy you have updated!

Love the chapter really, and looking back i realise i must've read half of it at school before class started and forgot!

I love Cloud and Sephiroths conversation in the infirmaty, not even sure why really!

Anyways, keep up the fantabulous work!

Holy monkey balls! This is EPIC! Can't wait for more!
cyne

Awesome chapter! I am so glad the Sephiroth has finally figured out that the Cloud from his childhood and the Cloud now are one and the same. His conversation with Cloud in the infirmary was just fun to read. Same goes with his conversation with Zach. I was really starting to see tome nice Zack-Sephiroth friendship bonds forming there. On a completely different note, for some reason I've convinced myself that the little girl that Vincent ran into was Yuffie. I'll find out eventually. As always, I am looking forward to more.

Thank you for taking the time to write such an impressive story. The prologue did well in hooking me in and everything that followed continued to impress. Your use of words and descriptions and the overall writing style makes for a smooth read. I ended up reading most of this in one go.

This level of originality in something like a time travel fic is truly rare, in my opinion. Most of my experiences with this type of plot have been re-hashings of canon with minor changes. The way you went about this and the incorporation of different characters is well thought out, in my opinion. If memory serves, there are only a few errors (as in, two or three typos and one or two cases where there isn't a space between two words. Unfortunately, I can't recall where they are).

The pacing and development of characters (as events pace, through their own introspection, etc) are all superb.

A+