Wow I can't believe I forgot to finish reading this. It's really good. Seph is gonna be so mad when he finds out who has Cloud now, and probably Zack too. Please update soon.

you rock!

Be ready to feel Hojo's ultimate love. ♥

Oh F! I hope Sephiroth kills that bastard. Godsdamn Hojo, slimy little slug makes you want to incinerate anything he has touched to sterilize it. Yech. I so totally hate Hojo.

I will be eagarly looking forward to your next update.

ohmaohmanohman!oh! update quickly!

oh man. youre totally making me worried.

oh wow. im stunned. im loving it so far.
cool, hes got a nibel wolf.

wow. this is crazy good.

""Because dina and I are whores for time-travel fics.""
haha. ME TOO! i call em 'second chance' storys... theres a few on here that i just love.
i like to read them because things just turned out so tragic for sephiroth. and alot of that could have been prevented. ahh, the 'what if' doomer.
this first chap. ouch. harsh. cold.
lab?
onto next chap. youve caught my interest.

WOHOO! This chapter was great! Everything I could possibly want from a chapter. :) And it's moved so much farther into the story than I expected. Love it. I can't believe Hojo got him after all. How did they get pass Zack AND Cloud? ::wonders excessively::

BTW, The part where Sephiroth provides back up to Cloud's threat about hurting Gensis if he so much as touched a hair on Aeris hair... "He will Genesis." haha, it made me laugh to picture Seph egging the threat along. Schoolyard-Fight style... haha

I noticed two small parts where the words were a bit jumbled. 1) "Don't look at me *that like* sir. It makes me feel like a bug under a microscope." and 2)"...Farewell to his plans of training all day *by on his own*." Just thought I should mention it for corrections.

Once again, really loved this chapter!!

God chapter... I especially like the length. There's not much action until the end, but I like getting to know a story and the author through the day-to-day minutia. I liked you described the fight- it was a fast, short fight and you didn't bog the reader down making sure we knew which foot Cloud was standing on when Attacker A impacted Attacker B and how much momentum was involved. I can't tell you how much I like that you keep tying all of this in with Nordic culture. It's fun to see what I recognize and what you've adapted.

That said, for feeding him to Hojo early: I hope kappas climb out of your toilet in the night. Or Hojos. It'd be a fitting end for the *#^$*@#^#&#&@^#&*$#!@.

As usual, your writing is crisp and tight; the dialogue is in character and the plot-developments are kick-ass.

Genesis and Angeal didn't exist before Cloud came back and changed things? That is a /nice/ twist because it opens up so many possibilities. But you've let Cloud get taken which has me really worried. What if Hojo manages to make /him/ all batshit and evil? (Since Sephiroth seems to have gotten away.)

Looking forward to the revolution...

EVIL.

. . . Snap. I've been putting off reading this story for ~exactly~ that kind of cliff-hanger. TT_TT

I like how Vincent isn't Aeris's bodyguard (like in some stories), how some things are at once more depressing and less depressing than the previous timeline, and that the potential yuri completely blindsided me. I love timetravel fics that honestly surprise me.

Perfect. That is the only way to describe this chapter and the entire story. You are an amazing writer. The only way this can get any better is when you update. I can't for the life of me think of a way this could be any better, even though I hate that you ended with that cliffhanger I believe that it worked the best. I'm looking forward to you updating ( I just really really hope you don't get writers block right now.)