Awesome story, cute ending, love it! x3

loved it. perfect.

You have amazing talent. Your story was really beautiful with many ups and downs. - definatetly favorite matirial.

thats it?

what about the relationship, eiri and shu?

and Eiris conclusion was...?

ah come on, it can't be over yet. There's like SUSHI BAR missing and yeah lol. But It's really good and I like it and yeah I want the scene in the sushi bar lol. Keep it up!

final chapter already? ok... WOW that was fast. This chapter was cliffy. I'm glad I only read it now so I can read it right after i click submit review haha,.

Ch 7

AW! The end was kawaii, but what about the significance of the sushi bar?

Great story, I'm gonna re-read it when you post it on Gurabite!

EIRI-CHICK

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Ah ... THE END should be where eiri make up with shu and shows his appreciation for shu ... yes? no ?

A shuichi with tact-just the way i like him. Great conclusion, this should by no means be the end. there are so many ways the story could be continued-all using your unique p.o.v. style of course.

Fantastic chapter! I love you for making Yuki invite Shu-kun to the party; that was totally unexpected. And the kiss and Yuki's 'Oh...hell' was perfect and oh so satisfying. Also loved Shu's more mature attitude and his “whatever you say…” reply (see, Yuki, even Shu is smart enough to see through your wall-of-denial). Can't wait for the epilogue and Hiro & Shu's performance! Oh, and there's Yuki's sushi bar scene too...;)

Great chapter. Liked how Yuki got Shuichi to join him. Lookforward to the epilogue.

It was so sad reading Shuichi's conclusion that he is not Yuki's boyfriend.

Loved the timing of Shuichi's phone call. Liked Ayano's words to Yuki when he dropped her off.

No! Not "The End"! Please, please continue! You've got an awesome thing going, I'd hate for you to end it!

Liked what Yuki thought about the sex he had with Ayano, especially how his opinion changed.